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Click hereWhen I sense her relax beneath my hand, I start to work my thumb a little. I use her body as a guide. By the time her free hand goes between her legs, my thumb is pressed deep in her ass and pressing against my dick inside her pussy. My dick and thumb massage the pussy wall trapped between them.
Chrissy's fingers are flying over her clit. Perhaps remembering Nick's early suggestion to Kelly, she begins to bat at her clit with her fingertips. Even here, right behind her, I can't hear it above the sounds of my breathing and her soft, grunting moans.
Her hips drop and my dick nearly falls out of her. The way her legs collapse, for a fleeting second I'm afraid she's fainting or something. But they piston back up. She begins to bounce up and down on the balls of her feet. She's no longer moaning. She's holding her breath. I feel her body tensing.
I pull my hips back slightly. I can't really thrust, not the way she's bouncing up and down. I don't want to risk coming out of her and cumming on her or the floor. I want to cum inside her, not on her. I pull back enough that the head of my cock is opposite my thumb, one in her pussy, the other in her ass. I move my thumb over and around the head of my cock. From inside my sweet, lovely, amazing wife, I rub the head of my cock.
TBH, bro. I don't think that improv maneuver is what put her over the edge. That, I think, was the work of her clit-slapping fingers and her bouncing up and down on my dick. That maneuver, however, along with the shriek she let out and the way her ass and pussy clench so tight they nearly sever my thumb and cock, those are what puts me over the edge.
I feel my cock swell as a bolus of sperm and jizz juice come hurling down the pike. There's not enough room in my cock for it. My cock, hard as steel, is not capable of handling that much pressure. When the cannonball of jizz finally reaches the meatus (piss slit, cum hole) -- fucking BAM!
We're frozen in place (and time) but paradoxically still moving. Our bodies, twitch and jerk and spasm. My cock swells, erupts, swells, erupts. Her pussy and ass clench and release. The muscles in both of our assess clench tight. Our hips give weird little jerks. Our lungs give weird little gasps and squeaks. My head hangs down. Drops of my sweat fall to mingle with the sweat on her back. We're so close, so fucking close, to just melting into one another but reality interjects. Ever so slowly, we come back into ourselves, both leaving and taking a part of the other in the process. Maybe we aren't meant to melt into each other but simply swap pieces of each other until we're indistinguishable, one from the other.
My dick slips out of her. It's always such a heartbreaking moment of disconnection. I ease her onto the bed, on her back. She's still panting. We have one more thing to share, one more way of saying to ourselves we're one and the same, equal.
Fuck bro, I dig the fact you don't buy this shit, but it's true, totally true and totally cool.
I'm careful to avoid her clit. Like the head of my dick, at this point the slightest touch is almost too much to take. I put my mouth at the lower end of her pussy and push my tongue into her. I'm not worried about what's already leaked onto her thighs -- my cheeks will take care of that. I sup on our mingled essence, all but the very last mouthful.
I move up her body. She opens her arms, wraps me in them. Our lips touch, then open and we share ourselves.
The neighbors, Nick and Kelly, are silent. Forgotten.
From somewhere beneath us, I can't tell if it's from our building or the neighbors, comes the unmistakable sound of someone beating off.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI really liked it! The inner monologue is funny and the guy's in love with his wife. Then again i'm a millennial :) he's a surgeon yet he's afraid to hurt his wife during waxing, aww <3 sounds like marital bliss right there, different from what i usually come across here
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoStopped reading by middle of the first page... All that internal self doubt glorified struggling... Lost interest... Would you really think all that If you heard moaning from next door?
ericthebardalmost 7 years agoLove the sort of stream of consciousness thing going on. First person perspectives, in my opinion, are much more effective for immersion, and the running internal commentary drives it home. Sex was hot, but more importantly to me, the character telling the story was both fun and interesting.
Turbidusalmost 7 years agoAuthorWow, I really missed the mark, with some folks anyway.
I appreciate the comments that actually have something to work with.
I pictured the narrator as a bright, goofy, oblivious, self-absorbed but ultimately sweet guy, very much in love with his wife. That quite clearly didn't come across for some of the readers.
I hope everyone realizes he's totally a work of fiction - bits and pieces of characters from movies, TV shows etc. He's certainly not me. I'm not in my twenties. Alas, no one has called me skinny in some time and I've never even come close to being an exhibitionist.
I did once live in a three family home, but in New Haven, not Hartford. They are close together but I never heard anyone having sex. Pity.
I was poking fun at stereotypical hipsters and concede I might have shoved too much slang and text-isms into the story.
I would never call my readers mother-fuckers, at least not in anger. I was, through, the narrator, laughing at how men always lie about the size of their penises. That's all.
Anyway, for the helpful comments, as always, much appreciated. For the others, I hope you found something closer to your tastes.
T
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoDo people think these are real stories? I wonder sometimes.
I get that you want the narrator to be self-absorbed but you take it so far, I can see why some readers might just shut down. I wouldn't call him repulsive but he is a little hard to take. I have to say, I don't know how old you are and didn't check your bio, but I work with a lot of twenty-somethings. They're not like that. Where you going for a caricature? If so, wrong venue buddy.
You do manage to make him a little more charming but he brags so much about his hair and his dick I think you lost people before then.
Help your readers like the characters first, then expose their flaws.
As far as the sex goes. That was fine.
Is it a 5? No. Is it as bad as a couple of the other comments suggest? No.
