All Comments on 'Windows Bk. 01 Ch. 04'

If I asked you to write a story especially designed to get me aroused, you could not have done a better job. You cast your characters perfectly, and flesh them out brilliantly, so that we the readers can imagine the scene, and exactly what is going on, right up to the squeaky gate. I do, however, really feel for Sylvia. Even if she somehow relaxes and takes a valium (the relaxing drug of choice in the 1960s) she is doomed. Too many people know, and Tim is making it "obvious" that she is seducing him, not the other way around or that she is being blackmailed and forced! The poor, unfortunate woman. Well, I hope her marriage survives, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Five Stars, ~~JB

I didn't think it was possible, but it is! This story just keeps getting better and better, more raunchy if that is at all possible. I'm really enjoying the way Sylvia is allowing herself to be backed into a corner by her blackmailer, Tim. Does she really believe that fucking him will be an end to her nightmare? No fucking chance! Tim's making damn sure that everyone know's that they're fucking, even though the reality of the case is they're not (not yet at least!)

I love the way you craft your tales into a 'forced fucking' situation. Sylvia feigns not liking it, but when it comes down to it, I believe we'll read all about her screaming orgasms as she's repeatedly fucked. It won't just stop with Tim either will it, her teenaged admirer will be wanting his share soon. I'm loving this story, one of your best! 5 Stars, well deserved and awarded.