All Comments on 'Winged'

I loved this story. I didn't know what was going to happen next, I love and admire your way of writing.

incorrect syntax at times - sometimes looking like story had been written by very young inexperienced writer. BUT - a very good telling of the story. Cinderella? I liked the style of your writing. At the same time it was sensuous as well as a bit uncomfortable. Basically a good job, one of the best efforts I've read here. But get some English lessons!