- Romance
- Winter Vacation
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All Comments on 'Winter Vacation'
by VW__Driver
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years ago...I can't buy into cheat stories where there is no dialogue about the problems in marriage.Long-term marriages are not violated without preamble.pistolpackinpete
H.H.Morantover 14 years ago</style>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>I have to agree with the first comment, although to be
fair the author did try to show the boredom and lack of common interests that
existed in the marriage more than is ordinary in these stories.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>I think that the limiting factor is the “illicit sex on
vacation” genre is lack of insight it gives into the spuse’s mind. Here she was
bored and without any great consideration of the possible consequences –
long or short term – plunged right in.<span style="mso-spacerun:
yes"> </span>Possible – but why now?<span style="mso-spacerun:
yes"> </span>Why did she do it within 48 hours of arrival when she’d
never given it thought?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>A somewhat more plausible line – and since the trip
to getting fucked is almost always more interesting than the act itself –
consider a rewrite where the story begins with the end of a previous vacation,
and the woman swearing to herself that (1) she will loose every pound she’s put
on since she married, and maybe a few more besides and (2) she will exercise
including Kegels – lots and lots of Kegels, and tone up her body in
general.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoPlainText>If her marriage is as grim as the author suggests she’s
going to need to do both those things when it (the marriage) finally collapses,
as it inevitably will, and she is thrown out into the world of singles once
more<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Anonymousover 14 years agoBy a single guy, perhaps divorced, I don't usually find cheating stories erotic, nor this one. Try again.
Anonymousover 14 years agoShe just got some loving . Her closet queer husband wouldn't
Anonymousover 14 years agoHusband is discribed as a failure in everything but supplying the security the wife needs so she can cheat. There is little communication about what she wants so that they can find some compromise or if necessary a divorce. She wants to have what she wants and the security of a husband who supplies all her other needs. In fact, her husband's needs if you look carefully are not really important to her. So then the cliche starts where she rationalizes that cheating - a word she avoids - is OK because he has failed her needs. However, does she say to herself, what are his needs? Does she really try to find out? This is a sad, dead marriage and a dead relationship. A better story would have been that she had decided that she was too selfish to stay married to him because he was not romantic enough for her et cetera, and now she is in the islands looking for a good time: that would be sexy and healthy for everyone.
Anonymousover 14 years agoaccurate. There was a couple growing apart and the wife taking possibly, the first time to cheat in her marriage. There is nothing of Romance, maybe a little lust but that is not in the category either. She sets up a winter vacation that she knows he does not like and has not liked for some time then goes where she would have little competition and finds someone to fuck, a deliberate planned action to reinforce her sex appeal to herself. The action here would be too little for a Loving Wives story.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis would have been great under "Erotic Couplings" but I read no romance in this. Great sex, no romance.
VW__Driverover 14 years agoAuthorThanks, all, for your comments. Very much appreciated, both positive and negative.
Bethybooover 12 years agoNow there's a vacation I could really sink my teeth into. Superbly written, every word enjoyable.
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