All Comments on 'Witchcraft and Best Friend's Husband'

There's a good start here. More detailed descriptions would help, and your pacing is a bit uneven.

Where did the witch come from? And why are the ingredients so easy to provide? Those pulled me out. As did wondering why no one noticed the physical changes in the narrator.

Why do you use full names including middle names? That's oddly repetitive, and not a reflection of how people actually speak.

It's a good effort, but needs a lot of refinement.

I can picture the author dictating it to one of those old tape recorders, watching a mornng game show and eating chocolates.

this story is total crap and was a waste of time, don't waste your time trying to write any more stories, you are not a writer by any means.