All Comments on 'Word Don't Come Easy to Me'

I like the unique writing style. It’s a good story for your first submission. Well done.

What a badly written story. Your spelling, Grammer and sentence structure is awful. Clearly English is not your native language. As such, you should have researched how to use proper words and sentences in english. Your story does not have any flow, you jump from one subject to the next and don't tie them together. Furthermore at the end of the story you say that you married her and made her your wife. In English you either say married her OR made her my wife. You just repeated yourself. I don't understand how this story was published on here.