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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Get some advice and/or help with your writing!

Many errors in spelling and punctuation.

For instance - 'you're' is short for 'you are', which would be more appropriate in "... I am happy it is you, your sweet and well ...', making it "... I am happy it is you, you're sweet and well ...'

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