All Comments on 'Yes, I Tricked and Forced My Sister'

A part 2 please.

Is this the start of more or are you going to let the reader finish it their own way.

I don't get why you wrote the parents into, it was really good with the sister, but next chapter may explain. It's just risky, cause the mother could recognize her son, with birthmarks and all that, or she may be too worry to recognize him...

Beautiful ending really. It doesn't need a chapter 2. Not every story has to have all its ends tied up (pun unintentional)... the cliffhanger is delightfully unexpected, powerful and still satisfying. Fun story, very well thought-through, outrageous, juicy, fun to read... great work!

Wanting to know what happens next!

Please, involve the parents. It's so darn good! That'd be awesome!

Disappointing work.

Your language use is improving, especially noticed that you have far fewer misplaced 'to which's. I enjoyed it, though I do wish you'd included him climaxing.

I thought the twist was going to be that the person he was talking to online wasn't really his sister, because MC said she looked like a virgin, but diary said she wasn't. Also, her strong resistance made him second guess himself if she thought it was real and didn't recognize that she agreed to it online. Like, I thought it could be that it was a friend's diary that he mistook for his sister's. But, what I couldn't reconcile was why that friend's account would be on the sister's laptop. Without that laptop portion you could have had a big reveal that it was actually rape and sis didn't agree to anything.

Also, come on MC is concerned about jizzing on her leaving his DNA, but he doesn't care that he is slobbering all over her?

The ending was unexpected, but I didn't hate it. I think MC could get out of this by confiscating their phones, cutting the internet wire and electric power to the house, locking the parents in a room and barricading it, and then 'forcing' the sister to shower and have her agree to not take a rape kit or report to cops and forget about it. I think that scenario is just too ridiculous because he was to do all of that without saying a word.

Ye, I think MC is just going to jail, unless he murders his whole family. Like there is no way around it. Father is too protective of a character to let this shit go after catching his son.

Man I want more to this! Definitely need future installments.

Legend says he is still going.

Not a fan, weakest of all your efforts so far.

Really good! Chapter 2 would be nice.

Good story. Spanking her would have been nice. A way of punishing her for "teasing" you or other past derisions. Maybe anal to the same extent.

Very much enjoyed this story; I like bondage and rape themes. Would be better if the story had an ending and followed up with sister and parent’s reactions.

Really am enjoying this story. Hope there is a second chapter. The only way out of this would be to put everyone in the closet. But that would a lot of DNA behind..

Oh I wish I had a brother like this!! To take me and make me his whore♥️♥️♥️♥️

Nice ending.