All Comments on 'You are Definitely Going to Hell Ch. 03'

Why on earth is it in First Time?

Great story, keep it going.

Great chapter 3. Cant wait for chapter 4. Hopefuly coming soon.....

Good story and well written....you weave an enticing web for your characters. I went back and read the previous chapters to get up to speed. This kid is having a helluva ride. 2 teachers, porn star, next store neighbor and a child hood friend, wow. All are flawed relationships which means there all probable going to blow-up in his face. Can't wait.

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Cheers

In my opinion, the last part strayed well into the suspension of disbelief, and seemed a little bit of a struggle after part one. Somehow, this part pulled together much better for me.

Thank you, and I will continue watching for the next part of rob's journey.

The story is good, and the details fit well for the late 80s. Rob’s life is simultaneously good and bed. His work is going great, and his friendships with Jenny and Jill are going very well. He’s getting a lot of sex without commitments. Yet there’s still Bec and Charlie. Both say they want him, let him close enough that each can hurt him. Both use excuses to hold him at a distance. There’s something going on with Charlie lying about dumping Wayne. Bec, I think is either in drug rehab, or dead from overdose.

Looking forward to next installment, hoping it isn’t a long time away.

Top drawer. Clearly a fantasy but a great read. Please continue with it. There are many loose ends to tie up and many ways to do that; I can’t wait to see how you choose to do it.

I love every chapter more than the one before. Can’t wait till ch 4. So many loose ends

It has been a great story through all three chapters. It would be a real shame if you let it turn dark in the final chapters. You have done a good job of maintaining a favorable balance by letting the pleasure outweigh the strife. the world is difficult enough without wasting time reading dark, depressing stories. Keep it up. Thanks!

You have three great stories I hope to see more of all of them.

It was worth waiting for.. very nice

5 stars

Great read. I have read all your stories now and I like this one the most. I think its because the characters all have flaws and you explore them more. I agree with lots of the other comments, we have Charlie and Bec and I wonder where you will take us next . Looking forward to the next instalment.

Go team Bec. 🙂

I was looking for a quick story to read, and finished all three in one sitting! Enough said… but hoping for more!!!

More please

Please call continue this dearie. I like the characters and the twists in the story

Dam I wish I hadn't found this one as so soon as then I wouldn't have to wait for more chapters to show up lol.......good story can't wait to read more. Oh and ,5 stars

Really enjoying this as I have your other series, thanks for your work

I’ve stayed up all night reading this series. Just really well done.

Very good, once again! Thanks, indeed, are necessary.

Really enjoying this one.

Read everything in one go. This is s brilliant series, the story is compelling , and the sex is rivetting.