by Barefan
This story is good. The build-up was well done and the characters felt distinctive. The only problem I found was that there wasn’t a definitive climax. It builds from stripping to paddling to him just running away. It just fell a bit flat by the end. Still, I hope to see more of your work in the future, you’re good at ramping up stories and I’m curious what you’ll do in the future.
I enjoyed the entire series and will look forward to your future ones.
Great series. Can’t wait for another series about Tim and the girls.
Thanks for the great story! I really look forward to the continuation!
great story
the unedited video gets leaked cops arrest him for indecent exposure but then realize he got set up
Tim could get the upper hand back but come have a realization moment about some of his own actions with his own employees
the meeting place in the end (not being judgemental) sounds almost like a women's only bar, as there was not a single male there to help out in his predicament or for a great place for hookups. if the ratio of men is one guy to 25 or better women what guy wouldn't be there all he would have to basicly be quite and polite and someone would come to him without him trying
this saga needs to continue in some sort of fashion
I gave 5 stars to each of the chapters. Please, continue, now it is not necessary to go back, it is he who deserves to be spanked by his employees, who were previously spanked by him. An erotic spanking with happy end. Better if there are many sessions.
I absolutely adored that video she got. That is something I wouldn't mind viewing and sharing at least a dozen times. He has a body all the ladies can't keep their eyes or hands off of. Nor should they ;)
These stories have been SO hot, thank you for writing them!!! Always looking forward to the next installment
Would love to see him accidentally cum in front of everyone from all the touching in a future story!
Love this series and I’ve grown really fond of Tim and Shawna! Would you consider writing an alternate version where things didn’t get so wild and traumatic for Tim? Instead, the clients manage to persuade him to model for their products. There are a lot of opportunities to explore during the fitting, photo shoots and even product launch event modelling!
I love the fact that all the women around him picture him naked now. I find it invigorating when the girls get an upper hand. Plus, hot men who blush are the cutest!
I enjoyed it. I don't break out in laughter much but this story did that. Great Job Please keep at it.
Fantastic. It started out great with his embarrassment in the office and just kept getting better, with even some room for an epilog if the other video gets wider viewing.