All Comments on 'Younger Sister Becomes My Mistress'

What do I think of this story? I think it's fucking awful.

A bold venture for you to write from the male POV. Interesting! Having read many of your previous stories, I wasn't expecting this cange of direction, and iI didn't twig until you came out with being her brother, although there were a couple of subtle hints.

To be honest, I didn't think it was up to your usual standard; "your" personal toughts and emotions, the sexual tension and sense of expectancy were not at the same level. I'm sure trying to writing from the opposite sex POV is not so easy to do convincingly.

I hope you persevere, and are not put off by hypercritical comments from people who post anon and who have never written an LR story.

Sibling love, with a strong dose of dominance!

Very arousing….

The blend of control and incest was pretty hot. The bathroom scenes are beginning to interest me more and more for some reason....