All Comments on 'You're Going to Sleep with Me Tonight'

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WittonWittonover 1 year ago

The author lost my attention when the forty second floor was four thousand feet in the air - high rise construction goes up at twelve feet a floor - not a hundred

bestkeptsecret678bestkeptsecret678over 1 year agoAuthor

Yup, that’s embarrassing. I should not have done that math in my head. Good catch. Plus, I dropped it into the wrong category, so plan to resubmit properly and will make that fix.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great ending. I Want to learn what kind of dom she turns into.

Paul4playPaul4playover 1 year ago

Excellent sexual tension…..and climax…..!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

what a load of bull shit

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I joined lit to read; then decided to write. It turns out I like it more than reading. I just published my first story in quite a while: His Business - Her Pleasure. It’s been a fast project, but a long time coming. My Here & Now story series will be exclusively written...