All Comments on 'You're My Wife Now Pt. 03'

Next part plwqsw!

Just seen a few mistakes.I really need a proofreader. Sorry.

Wonderful story that just keeps getting better. Next chapter please.💋

Veronica

Wonderful, waiting for the next part...Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

I enjoyed this! Good job 👍 But will Paul save poor Tami? I can sense a romance in the air. 😍

I love this concept. So many ways to spin off. So many "indignities" to happen and a white night to save her after she's been "irreversibly" modified. But, does he save her or does she submit and accept her fate?

Stop reading my comment and KEEP WRITING!!! ;)

shaping up to be another good one by this author ...TY

Don’t worry about the mistakes, if there are no mistakes you are doing something wrong. 💋

Veronica

Love this chapter, love the ending setup. Can't wait to hear about the last wife...

Sorry to be a downer about this story but there is too much brutality, rape, murder and mayhem for my taste.

Leeanna, I know that you have a difficult situation and write under less than desirable conditions. You are an excellent writer and I can’t even imagine what kind of works you could produce if you worked under ideal conditions. BTW, the Negative comments that you receive, just disregard them. First off, you cannot please everyone and if someone does not like one of your works, why did they read it? I can only speak for myself, when I begin reading a story that is not to my liking I stop reading, it is just that simple. I think that is what most people do. Therefore, it is impossible to explain why someone would read a story that they did not like the subject matter and then comment on the subject matter.

Keep on keeping on.

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Veronica

It is darker than the stuff I normally write. It's the premise though. Gang bosses aren't nice people.

Thank you Veronica. I appreciate your comment. I work long hours and have a few hobbies(including crossdressing when possible) . I write when I have a spare few hours. I just like to share my perverted imagination. I used to get upset when I got moaned at about grammar etc. Then I realised that I could delete comments LOL

Leeanna, I don’t think you have a perverted imagination, I think that you have a creative imagination with great insight and the ability to express it in words.

Speaking of hobbies, you read my profile and I have several hobbies listed. In addition I also do historical research and collect some coins & stamps, not so much for the coins & stamps themselves but for the history they represent.

So my lifestyle and interest are paradoxical at best or outright contradictory. Hobbies are a good thing they help keep us sane. I am just sorry that you cannot practice one of your hobbies as much as you would like. 🌹

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Veronica

Thanks, I get the chance about 3 times a year. I love history, the older the better. I live in Hertford in the UK. We have a lot of history here including a castle. The motte from 1066 is still here. I live near a church who's original was burnt by vikings.

I have posted an older housewife story that should be up soon. I will write part 3 of this in the next few days.

My specialty is German History with a bit of Roman History. Obviously, reading is also one of my hobbies. There is lots of history in the US but nothing like you have in Europe. Looking forward to part 3. 💋

Veronica

Sorry V, This is part 3! I mean part 4. LOL

Whatever, just write the next chapter. Don’t try and confuse me with the facts.

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Veronica

More please. Can’t wait to read about more abuse of sissy Tami

Oh please post part 3 as soon as possible, I’m really getting into how things are happening , you weave such an amazing path I wanna stay on for as long as I can . Thank you kindly for sharing.

I have just posted part 5 of Substitute wife. I do need to finish this story

Looking forward to reading more