All Comments on 'You're the One that I Want'

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toesucker1toesucker1over 1 year ago

Inventive and HOT. The role playing was great! Now I’m wondering if Mor will help “coach” Amy and Kevin in the future. Can’t wait for whatever you have in store.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveover 1 year ago

Another splendid chapter in the saga of Moriah and Suzie. I love the way you're showing us the depths of their relationship and their characters, especially Moriah. This is the first time it's clear she has insecurities about herself. I hope there's more back story coming up: now we're all dying to know how they met.

Brava!

toesucker1toesucker1over 1 year ago

"Come on, Mo! The guys might be oblivious but girls aren't. They asked me how we met, how you swept me off my feet, what you're like in bed..."

OK. Tell us all about it. Please.

MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Damn — the two MCs; hard to put into words but you have. Two uniquely real characters embedded in a relationship that feels so … . You keep it moving/flowing/so intensely erotic. Obviously captivated.

toesucker1toesucker1over 1 year ago

I forgot to say: I loved: "Hopefully they'll hold their husbands to a bit of a higher standard from now on."

LOL. They obviously don't know what they're missing. ;-)

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Hello lovelies! I have a one-off I sent through to be posted this weekend hopefully. “Finest of Pearls” is about a lesbian that falls in love with a straight girl at first sight. Hope you all enjoy! Chapter three of Nightwatch will be posted this month, too! Thanks for your ...

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