by EMScarlett
I love this story. The sense of her yearning and needing is so real. You can get the sexual tension read in intensity with the urgency of the writing.
Nice writing, EMScarlett. You do a great job showing how powerfully erotic giving up control -- both the desire to, and the physical reality -- can be.
In more ways than one, I don’t think I could envisage it any better.
Tess (UK)
It's amazing how you find words and phrases to paint what seems to be beyond words, EMScarlett. You are an artist of keeping it simply and yet so deep!