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by EMScarlett

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The intensity is real, the need is palpable.

I love this story. The sense of her yearning and needing is so real. You can get the sexual tension read in intensity with the urgency of the writing.

visioneervisioneerover 3 years ago

Nice writing, EMScarlett. You do a great job showing how powerfully erotic giving up control -- both the desire to, and the physical reality -- can be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfectly Captured

In more ways than one, I don’t think I could envisage it any better.

Tess (UK)

hazporthazportalmost 3 years ago

It's amazing how you find words and phrases to paint what seems to be beyond words, EMScarlett. You are an artist of keeping it simply and yet so deep!

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I am a switch who loves to write BDSM themed stories. Sometimes my stories will involve scenarios about female dominance, and other times they will be about female submission. Which one I write about depends on what kind of mood I am in when I sit down to write that day! You...