All Comments on 'Team Moms and Daughters Targeted'

Hot story!! Thanks for writing it

Thanks for the positive comment.

Could have been good, but you really need to dial back on the use of MILF and mature. We get they're MILFs and have mature pussies. You only need to mention it a handful of times in the story, not in every sentence. It is distracting and makes the difference in five stars and three.

Also if you have a thing about BBC and humiliation, that's cool. Each their own. But you should categorize it in IR or non consent. An accurate category can get better scores. I hate being negative though, so keep trying. 3/5 stars

Dewey Cheatham

Good input Dewey. Thanks. I will definitely use your suggestions in future stories.

Wonderful!

I actually thought the repeated mentioning of MILF and mature was intentional. When done right it keeps the kink fresh in the mind.

Interesting choice our narrator did not get any mature soccer mom MILF pussy himself.

5 stars, but I wouldn't mind longer stories.

Good input, Thanks. I am working on some new material I think you will like.