All Comments on 'Zach's Dark Desires Pt. 11'

Well…the chapter is shorter and shorter. Hey author, if you need a break…that's okay. Just no normal master/bottom bullshit. In terms of Kevin guy, do u want to dump Zack and replace with a new toy? That is really lacking of responsibility.

So glad you are back. One of the best stories I have read.

I had a big break. I'm back now though. Zach is always the center of the story. I just thought it would be cool to have a moment where Kevin sees it from the outside... Maybe I was wrong. I don't think I was though.

Sorry for being harsh. Just your recent chapter is so different from your earlier ones. The orgy scene is vague and shallow, and I don't see how Zack get any growth in it. As of Kevin, perhaps you can write some side stories?

Definite change from erotic submission to being used by all the men at the party. Not a fan of this development.