All Comments on 'Zoe Chloe 01'

Hmmm interesting story. I kinda like it, of course I like the strange offbeat stories. lol I think this has potential.

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That is the weirdest writing I have ever read !

Rather hard to follow.

But it's late, my mind is foggy, my eyes burn from reading too many stories on my computer.

I did wonder if boy zoe chloe was into cool cars and or trucks.

The mention of Red paint and chrome wheels on his/her new to them automobile, answered my curiosity.

I did notice a few grammatical oppsies also !

Maybe some better proof reading before submitting ?