by AppleInSquareShape
This was very well made and as a big fan of Total Drama I just couldn't resist whipping out my cock and masturbate over what is a fantastically written story!
Well done, when is part 2 coming out?
Glad you liked it man!
I'd happily help you out with that ;)
Next part is scheduled to come out soon :o
But not sure when
It's a good story but I believe that you went into the sex part a bit too early and if you just kept them apart for a bit then it would of been better as the more tease there is the more of an explosion there will be!
I actually really like that it didn't have too much build up.. I think it has a good amount of tease, but a little bit more wouldn't hurt. I would definitely read this again.
Very good story, I love it.
i climaxed three times while reading this id have done more but my cock was starting to hurt good writing thanks