All Comments on 'Free Use Leaders Rise to Power Ch. 02'

Applause FemaleRoleActFantasy applause. Your writing style allowed me to visualize events and almost hear each character's words. Takes talent to give Ashlee voice while avoiding the dreaded first person narrative. Careful or you just might become my favorite NonCon/Reluc author.

Also, get an editor. This makes no sense based on what you wrote in ch1. Basic garbage.

Having to wait until 20 seems like a waste. Fun story! I liked it, outlandish of course, but hot!

Don't listen to these assholes critizing the "logic or impossiblity " of such situation. It is fantse and i can't wait to read the next chapter.. The single paragraph on thetrap and rae of Ashle's best friend by her own father was HOT!