All Comments on 'The Travellers Ch. 04'

please learn proper word usage and spelling. I suggest you get one of the volunteer editors available via Literotica.com.

With very few words you have defined the primary characters in the story; I consider that one mark of a good writer. Please continue. I want to see where this goes and how the characters get wherever it is they're going.

This is a great story so far. I can't wait for the next part. As for the spelling the previous person complained about I think it is perfect for the part of the world that it is taking place in. ^^

Great Series! When will you continue the story?

Do I need to say more?

Hi

Just how long do we wait for hte next instalment

Wondering if something has happened to the author as this story line and your other one both just stop. I hope not. Really like your writing, plots and the web you weave!