All Comments on 'My Trip to the Dentist'

I hope you gave your new dentist a rave review on Zocdoc, or some equivalent. Sorry about your cavity, but since you got a gold star I'm sure the experience was worth it. I'll bet your odontophobia is now a thing of the past! Enjoyable story. 5*~~JB

That's the great thing about fantasy porn. You can make it utterly ridiculous and it still fits the genre. But i felt that this one was so ludicrous that the eroticism was wiped out.

You use hyphens where they are not needed. Nova-cane should be novacaine. Dental-chair should be dental chair. There are several other times that the hyphen should be omitted: “good-boy”, “love channel”, and “just-about”. Are a few examples, there are others. Sometimes you used the hyphen correctly. You need to have a good proofreader look over your stories before you post them.

Nice story. I remember going to the dentist when they still used gas and air

When I came around he was pulling up his trousers and my knickers were on the wrong way.

Anna

That was a fun, short read.

Hoping there will be more chapters to come.

We have 32 teeth. If he needs to have dental work on each of them, he will spending a long time filling her hole while she fills his. Maybe I should show my female dentist this story. :)