All Comments on 'Our Pussy'

Superb! Such empowerment for a woman with a broken spine - I immediately thought of my story on the same theme, Rope and Veil. I hope yours garners a similar response.

Creative idea, well presented. Many thanks. 5*

Thank you both for the comments! :-)

Creative .

Love the idea and the execution, great job!

No greater love hath she, indeed. Its a very touching take on inclusion and disability in its own unique way. I was fully invested in her hope and vulnerability.

sometimes there are no words to say , just a smile to give. 5 stars

So many-many, many-many great lines but the tone though is exquisite. Lit’s best imagination by far. I practically laughed with every paragraph.Especially the camera request 🤣 Delightful and delicious writing.

The 750 word limit is perfect for teasing little shorts like this.

Very nice progression of ownership, shows that you've pulled off a good 750-word story well.