by Lily_May_Stories
... but then you ruin it by having him stick his cock up her ass!! Realy disgusting after that.
Good first story. Hope that you’re planning a follow up for the martini bar and perhaps a trip to MargoIsland.
I liked the touch of how the leaf was similar in shape to a spade.
Please please please continue this story! You have a way with putting words together that makes me think ahead, only to be wrong!
Overall this was well done. I guess you were a bit too excited writing the sex scenes and you skipped over some little details that would have made the action more coherent (e.g. How did Erica go from having sex by the pool with Caster, to then magically showing up in the shower? Was she teleported?) Still, this was a good one.
Oh…please keep going…this really spoke to me. There’s not enough in this genre for women by women.