All Comments on 'Dawn and the Lunch Meeting'

Mediocre; it would have enhance the story if other men had shown up and took turns with her; and if there was a reason for the strong smell. Its as if she wasn't telling her husband everything.

Thanks for the warning 1☆ without reading the story.

A ridiculous “true” story. A husband with no self respect married to a whore. How on earth have they managed to have children. Poor things having parents like these two apologies for human beings!

Just here for the comments by the little incel trolls. They would be funny if not so pathetic

Three stories and 18 followers doesn't take a troll to know your writing is shit, Find another hobby!

Holy shit! That's kinky, but hot as hell. Keep writing!

don't care that he liked it or not, its a two for me just on the flow of the story and as written. Wasn't much there for me to like or hate. Felt like it was missing a lot of emotion.

Hot AF.

Fuck, yes. Love reading the Dawn stories. Please keep them coming.

I will never understand the trolls that bitch about the story content. It's literally what the category is for, AND you give a warning at the beginning of the story!

Maybe they don't like the confused tingle in their pants when they read these stories?

Trash

Good time to turn off the star grading.

I did not read the story. I simply wanted to comment in thanks to the author for being upfront about his writing pathetic cuck bull.

No wonder the world's fucked up with trash like this raising children

If you put your fetish story in the Fetish category instead of trolling Loving Wives, you wouldn't need to turn off ratings to avoid the backlash of being a troll. Just saying...

(- 5 stars) nothing worth commenting about...........

lol... wow. Literotica supposedly moderates comments, but they approve all of the blatant troll crap. Why?

Keep up the good work, dude. Ignore the haters that only wish women would have sex with them.

utter rubbish

I wish it were possible to give a - star.

Real stories are the best. Keep it up.

"they approve all of the blatant troll crap." - Anonymous

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Probably because the troll crap is primarily the stories, often deliberately posted in the wrong category, are intended to draw out more comments.

Didn't like it.

"Probably because the troll crap is primarily the stories, often deliberately posted in the wrong category, are intended to draw out more comments." - Anonymous

Have you ever read the category description?

"Loving Wives

Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. "

This story is posted EXACTLY where it is supposed to be. Just because you guys are threatened by the concept of wife sharing, swinging, etc doesn't men that the story is in the wrong place.

A great story. I like the real ones like this that aren't overly dramatic that would have Greg sporting a baseball bat in his pants.

Great story and please keep writing.

Ignore the trolls. Many of them are just men whose wives or girlfriends cheated on them, and they feel inadequate and bitter.