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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/16/09

nice story

revenge is best served with jelly!COGITO!

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by Anonymous07/16/09

This is probably the best farce I have ever read.

Thanks for making me laff and if I ever have to be in his shoes I hope I can put it together so well.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

guilty pleasures ...

... that's HDK for you. :)

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by Zeb4007/16/09

One word says it all.

This story was "sweet". Thanks. Paul

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Sick!!

HDK,

You have a sick and twisted mind and I love it. It is such great fun to read your stories.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Damn!

We have another winner.

Boyd

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by Anonymous07/16/09

loved it

heh heh heh.you are so warped...that's what I love about your writing. The hardest thing for me is waiting for your next one.

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by zed007/16/09

Probably The Best. . .

. . .short story I have ever read.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Hilarious

Holy Shit!!! Got quite a laugh outta that story :D

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by gusteuf07/16/09

Outstanding...

HDK, I am constantly amazed at your talents. There are some very good authors on here, that I truly enjoy reading. But... I will say it again, you are at the top of the list. Humor, irony, thoughtful, inventive, and lets be blunt, at times just down right twisted and sick... It is an absolute pleasure to see one of your stories posted. Thanks for your time and effort.

Eagerly anticipating your next tale

Gus

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio07/16/09

One of the funniest and one of the best.

Very hard to top this! Lots of fun and a nice piece of work. Thanks for writing.

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by juanwildone07/16/09

Sweet ;-)

Oh ho ho hdk, that was fun. The sweetest revenge all wrapped up in one cracker jack story. Excellent! Oh yeah, thanks a lot for raising the fucking bar amigo! Wait a second, I know, go clean up some of your quote marks (that's messed up man) ... ah, I feel better now.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

half way and I just gave up

this pseudo perry mason just don't work for me.

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by KIKISKISS07/16/09

THANK YOU!, THANK YOU!, THANK YOU!

For another winner. Your stories are always fabulous and I wait in anxious anticipation for your next story. You are the best!!

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Oh boy!

That was hilarious!

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by TE_Ross07/16/09

Damn it HDK!

It's 3:50am and my laughing woke the wife again. BTW, your imagery with the donuts was brilliant.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Excpt for the lack of a Beatles song title

this is fuckin' perfect!

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by Tail End Pete07/16/09

Yup, Sweet

Way to go HDK!! Another home run, but where's the Beatle's song title?

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Good story

And for the posters below who seem to not be aware, the title IS a Beatles song. "Not Guilty" is a song written by George Harrison that very nearly got on The White Album, and is better than a lot of songs on that album, but got cut basically because John Lennon and Paul McCartney didn't allow many slots for Harrison's songs. It's been widely bootlegged, and finally was released officially on one of the Anthology discs in the 1990s.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Sweet, indeed

LOL! that's a fun read. made my day.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

perfect

It's 3:20 am and I too almost woke my wife. This story is hilarious. I kept picturing her face full of jelly. I love your sense of humor. Thanks for a great read. Luis

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by Drall07/16/09

Wow!

Thank you so much,HDK. It was so funny and I'm still laughing. A really great story!

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Just Great !!!

Well put together and funny. First comment Ive made in a long time. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Thanks

That made my day.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Absolutely . . .

just plain 'Sweet' JimdinMn

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by Anonymous07/16/09

I Love It!

I give it an undeserved 100 just because I Enjoy it. Far away from your best work, but very funny.

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by bruce2207/16/09

HDK rides again!

This morning as I was doing my three miles I got to thinking that it is hard to find a good story on Literotica of late. And that perhaps the commentators were killing it. So I decided to check to see if there were any known "good authors" up today. With HDK posting the week was saved.
The story was deliciously funny, well written and a great consequences tale!! Thanks!

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by capecodmercury07/16/09

Quirky and fun

All I can say is thanks. Fast, light and fun. You've taken a classic scenario (husband getting the revenge fucks from the wife of the lover) and made it fresh by adding a nice twist. I love the concept of the husband setting up one lover by dropping the wallet at the house of the other lover.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Funny, funny, funny...

What a wit! So droll. You made my day.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Sweet...

...Sweeter......HDK! Congratulations and "Merci beaucoup"!-----Bavarian

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by Britease07/16/09

Fantastic

However, you bugger! I'm three quarters of the way through a new story that bears a remarkable similarity to this one. Now I'll have to rewrite it. Never mind, it probably wouldn't have been as good as yours anyway.

Thanks for the laugh. I love it when 'loving wives' stories are amusing.

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by louguy3507/16/09

Great to see...

...one of the excellent writers of the LW genre again on Lit.com. Great piece of humorous writing. Thanks, HDK!

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by gyjunkie07/16/09

A breath of fresh air.

This is the best LW story of the past few weeks. Looking forward to your next story. Thanks.

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by JADED_ONE196907/16/09

That was COLD!

Great story HDK.

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by woodmanone07/16/09

More please

Great read, wonderful revenge, I always enjoy your writing but this on may have to go to the top of the list. More please.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Great little tale

Welcome back HDK.
You are the best at humo(u)rous LW stories and one of the best in LW overall. Very entertaining - quite made my day.
I've been regaling this (with difficulty) to my wife as I wiped my tears and struggled to make coherent sentences.
Thank you
Norman

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Sweet indeed!

HDK in top form--hooray! This has got to be the luckiest cuckold in the history of Literotica, if not of the entire planet earth. I can't help chuckling when I think about the conversation he and June are going to have after the policemen leave.
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However--all us true-blue Beatles fans know that "Not Guilty" was never released by the Beatles. It's a George Harrison song that was slated to be on the "White Album," but dropped off at the last minute and only released later, on a Harrison solo album. HDK, are you going to write stories to the combined solo output of the four Beatles as well? If so, we have hundreds more masterpieces to look forward to! Thanks, ohio

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by kelly_kelly07/16/09

Sweet? Nope Hot & Spicy.

Believe it or not, I'm in my hospital bed, just got my appendix operation two days ago. I was very bored & thought to check some "LW" stories & got this oneWow!!! I really enjoyed it. Everyone is saying it "sweet", but it was "Hot & Spicy"I liked the "jelly" thing, it was funny & entertaining. Just wondering how he & June will continue from here?Anyway, it was fun read & at least have something for time pass.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

HDK at his best

This is one of the customarily outstanding, extremely entertaining stories by this author of Loving Wives tales. He sure has a way of writing that adds that extra element of comedy. Nice good Harddaysknight! RAG

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Excellent!

Absolutlely brilliant, I rolled with laughter!

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by Ducky707/16/09

Quite the ending - SWEET is an understatement

Who ever only read half this story missed the best part of the whole thing. This ending was the best. Thanks

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Great Read

Excellent, well written, and entertaining as hell. Well done!

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by Chilster100007/16/09

Great story HDK.

HDK, great story but talk about an obscure title. Gees I even had to look that one up and that never (well almost I guess) happens. Thanks.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

amazing!

a little short, but still sweet. haha, oh man, that i really enjoyed this story of yours hdk. although, its not quite what i would have done upon finding out what a slut my wife was, but still, i applaud your ingenuity!

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by ryu7707/16/09

Hahahahahaha!!!!

Sweet indeed. I just love HDK´s wicked sense of humor.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

OMG!! THIS WAS GOOD!

This was the best story I have read, bar none. I Laughed so much people kept asking me if I was ok or looking around the corner.

Thanks for the posting

-Risq

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by Anonymous07/16/09

The plot is as old as the hills.

Not well written. Mildly amusing in a juvenile type of way. In the wrong category. Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

ROTFLMAO...This too fucking funny!

WOW! this was one helluva story! too funny for words! HDK this story brighten my day concsiderably! Please you must give us more of this type of story! It was, in the protaganist's words, SWEET!

Dusty
USA

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by Anonymous07/16/09

great humor bar none!!

i loved the story so much i would read it again! nicely done hdk!

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by Anonymous07/16/09

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Should have been labeled a "comedy", but was freaking funny as hell!

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