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Running out!

I'm running out of things to say about you Anna (comments on other stories) and spunk to honour you with, my poor cock needs some tlc...... not the thrashing I've been giving it over you..... hhmmm..... wish you'd been here..... then it really would have been...... OVER YOU..... LOL.....

Fucking great again!

xxx

Carl doesn't love Sandy

Didn't you read the first chapter? It starts with the words "Have you ever wanted to go back in time and do something over again?" The sixth paragraph starts with "My second chance began with a phone call"...from Anne. Odd that she would still be in his phone after all that time...NOT. The author is writing a story (and very well I might add since you all forgot about Sandy since chapter 4 'till now) about Carl's second chance at life and love not Anne's. Anne for all her initial faults is Carl's true love

Need more...(still from chapter one)..."I put my wife through a hell of her own by not being around because I was busy unwittingly digging the grave of my own career. I missed my two kids' birthdays and even a Christmas because of Anne's reign of terror." If he thought that was putting his wife and family through hell, then what does he consider it now as he does to them again in geometric multiples by first using his wife as an incubation box for Anne's and his child, and merrily fucking Anne and everyone else he can as he travels the globe. I'm sure pregnant Sandy is happy at home helping the kids with their homework having just finished their fine Mac and cheese dinner.

Soon (but not too soon) Anne will die in Carl's loving arms, Carl will collect a big check, Sandy will give birth to the only child he truly desires, Carl will leave Sandy and the old kids (hell he was never there for them anyway and why would he ever want that life back), and then Carl lives out his life happily with his new baby (he'll call her Annette) being raised jointly by the troupe gathering around him already.

Ah.... it worked this time!

The rating thingy.... I've given this the 5*!!!! Off to read the second part now.

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Fuck me!!!!!!! Please, please........

.....hahaha....... I should be so lucky. I thought a woman like you could only exist in my perverted mind. You are a (wet) dream come true Anna. Is there anything you won't do???? Love it....... I want to rate this as a 5* but that rating thingy isn't working at the minute but I'll come back....... I've already cum once!!

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I agree, Carl is forgetting his true wife and the love they share just to have orgies all the time. It was one thing to be with a friend til she died but another to be doing all this with everyone. Hurry up and die already.

Not bad

The narrator makes too many comments about how hot he thinks other men's cocks, balls, and butts are. Otherwise this is a decent story.

Good one

I really liked it. hot story. maybe could have been a little more build up, but i thought it was great.

Kinda lacking

Good story line. Writing needs some work.

Sorry, guy. This wasn't very well done. The telling of the story was very stilted, virtually without any sign of emotion. You need to relax, feel it happening, and let it flow.

Keep on writing. It will come together for you.

But what about Sandy?

Great story, but it seems so sad that Carl is having all of this fun (and growth experience) and Sandy, his long suffering wife, is left behind. Why couldn't she be a part of all this?

Wonderful writing

Great plot, great writing, terrific humor! What's not to like? Adding this one to my favorites now.

Yummmmmm!

Makes for most lovely masturbation! Thank you!


P.S. Made a miss key on the stars! 5 on the first one!

When is the next story?

Enjoyed it, epilogue could have ended after "December 1". Actually I felt saddened seeing epilogue as I knew another of your story was over, will await the next one. Thanks

Fuck the asshole below

Good hot story. Why do shitheads like that even come to this site?

Contrived and hard to believe

The story started out hard and fast (pardon the pun), but quickly became silly and unarousing. There's absolutely no way an 18-year-old dude wouldn't know female parts, and the dialog with the cougar teaching him sounded like the bird and the bees talk. Boo, hiss!

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