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I liked it too.

Yes I liked it too, but for the oposite reason. I love these little 1page fuckings.

You did a good job in both you storys, discribing the action. Hot & fast. I assume Anna got to com also. At least I hope she did.

Just commentin' on the criticizin'

Anonymous, of COURSE you were criticizing! How else could somebody TAKE a comment about "a constant flaw" in their writing (I think that's what you said, anyway)?

(Criticism is not necessarily a negative thing, by the way.).

As to the "in' instead of 'ing' thing", there are DEFINITELY people who talk that way, and writers - such as Riverboy - sometimes try to accurately reflect that manner of speech within the dialog of certain characters in their writing.

While such phonetic replication of a dialect can be overdone (witness the dialog of certain African-American characters in many older novels), I don't think that Riverboy has even come CLOSE to crossing that line within his "A Handyman's Memoirs" chapters. Your Mileage May Vary, of course.

-Rei

Great story!

My girlfriend of a few months is not aware of my bi side. When she does I hope I can experience e something like this!

very nice

loved it, but what are they going to do about his wife? another chapter?

Great read

a really interesting story since I enjoy riding my bike cross country. I do think you have gone overboard with the concept that all rules are made to be broken. Rules are there for a reason. Looking back to the feel good generation we see what's come from that lifestyle. HIV, and other sexual related diseases happened because of broken rules. I realize this is a fictional story, but it's a little heavy on the mumbo jumbo doctrine in my humble opinion.

Good job!

Great chapter can't wait for the additional chapters to be written, please update soon

What a load of crap!

With friends like that, who needs enemies? The good news? It's easy to dump them and move on.

School Daze - Coming Soon

I plan on continuing the chain of stories and taking Heather and her friends, both old and new, on new explorations while they entertain the fraternity brothers as well as the sorority sisters on campus.

Alicia can heal the world with her cunt

Awesome update as usual! Keep it up, this is my favorite series and you always keep me wanting now.

Nice story. I liked it.

FYI, when using "to lie" (to rest or recline), the present participle is "lying" not "laying."

Proofread

Great story but SO many errors. Kinda stopped the mood of the read. still loved it but next time take the time to proofread!!

No complaints here.

I hope you didn't take my post as a criticism, because none was intended. If anything, I meant I wish I could go back and immerse myself in this epic for hours like I got to do when I first found it. I love everything about this story. The pacing is great, I like that you don't embroil it in a single event stretched over ten chapters, while there is a base story line, we get new content with almost every chapter. Keep it up as long as it's fun. Thanks

Great story

Very true to how it happened to us and we found it very exciting. Write another, you have a talent.

Think you should have spent a bit more time editing and polishing.

editing

Really needs it. Many mistakes.

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