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Want more please.

loving the story

Thanks! I am engrossed in the lives of the Andy and Simone. Please finish their story. Great characterbdevelopment

Yay!

I was thrilled to see you are writing again!
loved it -

A sex scene

This is a sex scene; not a story. As a sex scene, it is erotic and well written. As a story, it lacks plot, character development, conflict, resolution, and everything else that makes a story a story.

.Thanks

mmm very horny, had me rubbing my clit nice and hard with my big silver dildo

Delayed Puberty

Yep that's what this shit of a story is about some sad fucker who hasn't got past puberty and will probably grow up when he's 130. Too bad probably would have achieved his ultimate fantasy of AIDs by then
Limpwriter your story sucks

Tenderloin Ch. 02 is up - posted in BDSM

if you're looking for part 2 - the Lit Gods had decided to post it in BDSM rather than Group Sex... It is much more Group Sex than BDSM IMHO but apparently nobody's asking me, after all i'm only the author... ARGH! :(

Nice Story

Maybe somewhat hard to believe, but really hot nontheless. The imagery got me excited as I imagined being in the same situation.

great story

Love the story. Keep up the good work.

Freaky

Kinda hot, though. Got my dick rock hard.

A little short...

...but got my dick hard nonetheless.

Who thinks this shit is hot?

Boring, unimaginative and not very well written.

Wonderful

I can only add to the compliments...

And repeat the need for an editor. I look back at my work before and after and it's a world of difference. An editor would probably have caught the quick jump in the story from his not being linked to the linkage. An outside pair of eyes points out the things we assume as writers. The only hard part is finding one. I'd suggest mine but I don't want to loose him. LOL

Love the characters

I have to disagree with the last comment I'm really enjoying the way the story is involving. The new characters bring greater depth and more opportunities to expand storyline. I can't wait to see how the next chapter pans out

You broke my heart in the best way possible.

I couldn't stop to comment until I'd read the whole story. It was lovely, sexy, and a real pleasure to read. Thank you.

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