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Great Work!

Another great chapter in this story! Can't wait for the next one haha, any ideas when that will be?

Nasty

.................................................. .. Would u honestly want your wife fucked by some guy with aids or stuff?

Interesting erotica

mmmmm..I loved the story, more so because of interracial element in it. Yes, Muslim cocks are circumcised and this factors, I assume, results in longer staying power. These cocks are a huge attraction for most women, who love to give a blowjob (which woman does not?)

Arti

I understand that this is fiction, but...

...I seriously doubt that anyone would engage in this sort of behavior if they were "happily married for just a little bit over five years", and apparently continued to do so.
I'm all for open marriages where the spouses openly swap or swing or whatever, but should her unsuspecting hubby find out about her nocturnal activites, I can't imagine the marriage would be happy afterward.
A single event in the midst of a happy, yet boring marriage, could be forgiven, but repeatedly cheating and not caring for the feelings of the spouse and/or not contemplating the repercussions (with friends and family) could never be excused.
Hopefuly this story IS only fiction.

Getting Pathetic

This wimpy story is getting pretty pathetic and the guy must wear a condom all the time? Stuff like that makes a reader want to quit. How about a better plot?

BRAVO!

Thank you! So enjoying your creativity.

Good Story

nicely done. I hope there is a sequel.

Way to fast

No real build up. This husband, when did he start wanting to share her? Right after a baby? Spend more time developing the story. Then the sex will make some sort of sense. Sneaking around your home in daylight and no one noticed?

Very Nice

Being bi, I love MMF stories. This was really hot, and would have loved to be in this scene.

So fucking hot

My two live in girlfriends and I acted this out, and kept at it till we all passed out, two hours after recovering we did it again, Oh total bliss, I adore cunt and tongue fucking till I can drink the nectar produce from the orgasming cunts, More and more like this please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lancashire UK

YIPEEE!

Can't read it now, but you have made my day! I check every morning, and here you are. Can't wait to get home from work. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to on hump day!

love the detail

very hot. Took a bit too long in the prologue (try opening in the action, then filling in backstory).

Great

Very stimulating but a bit short

Boo

Don't like the way this turned much better with just the two guys

You will have to write some more of Dani's adventures. Enjoyed the two so far.

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