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Good Story

But please get an editor!

The spelling and grammar made it difficult to read.

Do you believe?

Part of the concept of "Just War" is that your opponents are demonstratively evil and automatically guilty of whatever crimes you accuse them of.

POTUS Barrack Obama has demonstratively committed the evil of having an abundance of melanin and therefore is automatically guilty of whatever fraudulent charges Fox News is suborned to repetitious.

Strange Behaviour

It seems the husband set the marriage up to fail. What kind of man doesn't have sex with or is to tired to have sex with his wife for months? The lack of communication make this story a fairly poor one.

Excellent!

I enjoyed reading this story from the beginning to the end. The slow build up and detailed storytelling when it all became hot made me really excited and aroused. I am looking forward to read more of your stories in the future. Job well done!

I feel like this was written by a teenager

Seriously do adult men really have so little understanding of human nature? This posting is just silly, it is certainly not EROTIC in any way whatsoever, and there isn't a single person in the story that behaves in a believable way?

What if he did release the videos?

Yeah, he got them from security cameras, but it wouldn't be too hard for anyone to figure out whose cameras they were. How long would it before the people at Tony's club get pissed. If he was willing to release videos of Jenny, why wouldn't he release videos of them?

Also, you made a point the she gets visitation rights and then made a point that she seemingly never uses those rights.

I like a good story where the husband stands up for himself, but this is a little too superficial.

KEEP GOING

Very hot, continue on.

I enjoy your stories

I wish you would post here more often. Thank you for the great stories

nice work

Please go on! Awesome story!

Thank you!

Rachel, you are driving me NUTS!
Thanks for these installments - I'm now so damn hard!

Harrrrrd!

Glad I also followed from flickr! Damn, Rach! You got me so hard!

Very good

Excellent story,nice pace and flow.

Grammar!!

Please, you start out with "Me and my wife" which should be, "My wife and I". I haven't read further. you need an editor and advisor. Please find one and do a rewrite. Then I might pursue an interesting concept.

So fucking awesome, I'm really curious to see if Gale/Livingston will fuck Eve Sawyer

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