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Great read

Well crafted, I laughed and then worried as the climax came at the end of the story.

Wow, great job

fantastic

what a wonderful story - it's so intimate and so passionate! I love it. Please keep writing, you are great!

This is a great read. You did a nice job of getting into the narrator's mind and explaining his thoughts in great detail. The sex was hot. It is not an entirely unbelievable scenario either.

Cute

Enjoyed the story immensely. As Hypoxia says, future possibilities are legion and intriguing. Thank you

wrong catagory this trash should be in rape section.

Wish people would relieve this would never happen

Nicely done. Extremely well written, hotter than hell. Definitely 5 star all the way.

Great storie!!! Great series!!!

Thanks for sharing that marvelous love story. It was great from beginning to end... Hope to read more from you in the near future. Thanks again for sharing...!!!

More

Great story, of course you left the story open for more chapters. Please write them.

Great, you:re back!

Your Carlos character is a good one to have started back with. Pls don't wait so long to post another.

silky is quite right

Both my GIFT BOX and silky's ***** tale here were directly inspired by ender's forum suggestion. We took different approaches; I like this one too.

Great addition

Love this series! I don't know if you have already gotten the next chapter written but I would love to read one of what Alicia does at Tommys house again. Maybe a friend drops by or the landlord wants the rent. Or maybe something a little different because I always wanted to fuck one of the girls working at a GameStop in the back room or behind the counter, maybe one while she is at work?

Keep it up NAE!

5 stars

Naughty girl, daddy wants to spank. Lovely little adventure.

I liked the concept for the story, but some plot and character development would have been nice. It would have made it more of a story than a raw description of sex.

Just rewards

I disagree with earlier assertion about two lesions since it read more like two bi-sexual individuals who happen to be in a lesbian relationship.
Only question one should ask is"was it an enjoyable read".
The answer for me was yes.

Wet and wild

You have such a way with words. I get a mental picture, and just go with it... thank you

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