All Comments on 'Aiding and Abetting'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
laughing my ass off

I am going to reread this story, when I am having a bad day!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Excellent, five stars, smiled and admit I actually had a tear in my eye.

mainer42mainer42about 4 years ago
different kind of reaction

Dude you made me laugh harder at this tale more than any of this genre ever has. Great story and I can only imagine the look on the Dad's face when has asked the question. Priceless!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
ROFL

I almost fell off the chair! The dad knew all along

rightbankrightbankabout 4 years ago
VERY entertaining

both serious and humorous

well done

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Great story

Unusual story here, and a lot of fun. It's always nice to poach one from the other team, and Candy sounds really sweet. Great story.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984about 4 years ago

This it's the nth time I've read this and still love the humour.would love a post 2

MarkT63MarkT63about 4 years ago
Awesome story

This is the first of your stories I have read. You hit a home run with this story!!! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

What a pleasure it was to read this story, I loved it. I laughed out out when I read the analogy "slept like an insomniac in a bell tower". Simply brilliant. I'm a new reader on Literotica and have yet to read a better story. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
what fun

sure made me laugh, I enjoyed it all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Mood elevator

Whenever I feel low, I read this story. Great humor. Simple story. Great writing. Please come up with more such stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sweet

Damn that was good. Candy was amazing!

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Fun Read

What a good story, I guess with him knowing Candy for the previous 5 years it was a quick as it appeared to be. I will be reading more of your work.

danoctoberdanoctoberalmost 4 years ago
Feel good story.

Light and romantic. *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I really really love this story

The twist at the end was fucking awesome.

tinfoilhattinfoilhatalmost 4 years ago
5 or 6 stars

This was a great story. Humor is never underrated.

KinPAKinPAalmost 4 years ago

I can’t count how many times I’ve read this story; it’s just that enjoyable. It’s one of a handful that I’ve read where I can say that I’d love to see this translated to the big screen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
makes me smile

every time I read this one it hits my funny bone. big smiles every time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

brilliant funny and great love story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Perfect prequel to a kinky cuck story or BTB story in Loving Wives BTB, depending upon which way writer wants to go with it. Beautiful young wife with strong sex appetite who goes both ways, nerdy hubby. Mother-in-law obviously in play and perhaps dominant. Go 10 chapters with it.

Rocketmann22Rocketmann22over 3 years ago
This story was better than I first rated it!

Okay, l’ve re-read this story and I made a mistake in my first rating. This story is very enjoyable, funny and easy to understand. So I give it five stars ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

That’s all I have to say about 😁(Forrest Gump).

KJay15KJay15over 3 years ago
Great story

And don't listen to anon 08/02/20, there's no need to turn this lovely story into another mess like the rest of the cuck/loving wives story's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I’ve read this several times and love it! My wife just asked what are you smiling about?

JohnDoe3151592JohnDoe3151592over 3 years ago
Wait, so...

How long did the dad know for?

Also, I'm thinking she might actually be demisexual, or something...

TajfaTajfaover 3 years ago

Loved it. Easy 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I absolutely love this story. It's silly and sappy. It's completely improbable but for once I don't fuckng care. I come back to this story once in a while when I need a jolt of pure fantasy and happiness.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Reading again. There is nothing bad anyone can say about this story. It is one of the best ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very clever

and well executed. This would make a very good movie script.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
anon.....

Awww gee.....ya gotta lurve a happy ending , dontcha ???.....

someoneothersomeoneotherover 3 years ago
Really super sweet

Read for 2nd time, and as good as first. I somewhat question the likelihood and believability of the father and mother's antics, but it was a minor sidelight to what was an interesting story.

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago
very humorous!

Great little love story. A little humor makes any story a lot better. Very good, keep writing. This was my second reading and it was just as funny and good as the first.

Helen1899Helen1899over 3 years ago
Unbelievable

It's unbelievable 26thNC and I read the same stories, but usually I disagree with everything they/he says, I have hi m down as a bitter twisted man who hates women because he has been badly hurt by one. How amazing then that I agree with every word he says about this story. Perhaps I have done him/her a disservice for which I apologise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What can I say

Beautiful. What a wonderful story. I was in threir with him totalye as he said,. Woman who can understand them. You can't live with them, You can't live without them. Again I sayBeutifull. LOVE. John xxxxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent story line!

What is wrong with these butch lesbos commenters, who keep running this story down! Hey lesbo dickheads, Candy wasn’t a lesbian, she was bi-sexual. Get with the times. Lesbos aren’t the only other game in town! These butch lesbians can’t stand the fact that a bisexual woman could find a man of her dreams! You butch lesbos go find a butch lesbo for your next partner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
a story rife with homophobia, but the comments are worse

Everyone is commenting about how the lesbians complaining in the comments should shut up. The people calling out the homophobia in the comments are well within their right. STFU heteros. You have no place to comment on us speaking up against homophobia.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A very sweet story.

As for the comments by the faggots and their useful idiots, the sodomite lifestyle is toxic. Get over yourselves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Oh wow, another bigot used the word faggot. How lovely and typical.

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 3 years ago

I wish this had been a bit longer, somehow. Most excellent!

oldtwitoldtwitover 3 years ago

Nice one, made me laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
!!

Lesbians are residents of Lesbos. Homosexual women are dyke,butch

LNJones34LNJones34over 3 years ago

Great, funny short read that I enjoyed very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice short funny

Funny and short nice story....five star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
fun

this was really enjoyable .

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really enjoyed your fun story. Nothing like reading with a smile on ones face. Five from me. Thanks for sharing.

DogFuzz...

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago

Fun loving story, moderate sex makes it enjoyable, light hearted and funny, which I neede because of an earlier read that was a bit of a downer although well written. Good Job!

ProfesseurXProfesseurXover 3 years ago

Nice story, enjoyed it.

SouthdownSouthdownover 3 years ago
Who KNEW?

I just read 4 stories in a row and loved every one. This one was a cross between a hallmark movie, internet porn and Monty Python! It was truly and thoroughly entertaining... Magnificent storytelling. Thank You 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot and sweet

Not as descriptive as I was looking for but really nicely written. Gave 5 star for the wonderful humor.

MeredithXMeredithXabout 3 years ago

Cute!

We don’t get enough stories with goofball humor. A healthy four stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Fun

Really enjoyed the humor. I could really picture Don's confusion.

DP

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 3 years ago

Top story, re-reading for the umteenth time and loving it every time.

lookbob66lookbob66about 3 years ago

Very, very good. Good dialog, even snappy. Lots of surprises. Plenty of humor. A very enjoyable little story.

Karn9Karn9about 3 years ago

Very enjoyable story, loved the ending! Just like an old married man too funny!

dgfergiedgfergieabout 3 years ago

The humor, the love, the titilation, a really fun story. Even better the second time around as I had a smile on my face knowing what was coming. Keep writing, we need more humor and a little sex isn't bad either.

PierremanvisPierremanvisabout 3 years ago
PIERREMANVIS

Just brilliant . Thanks to the author. 5 plus

lukeshortlukeshortabout 3 years ago
Great Story

Perfect mix of humor, romance and sex. 5*

SouthdownSouthdownabout 3 years ago
Loving Wife in training?

Great Story, I loved it, even when I thought it was all going to explode( or should that be implode?...your guess is as good as mine) 'Dad' was written as a clueless old geezer in the beginning, I'm glad the character was given an appropriate intelligence eventually, as the father of girls it is not difficult to know how this goes, and say the right thing at the right time! Thank You 5***** and a 'favorite story' acknowledgement

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago

Fantastic story!

Well written love story with enough humor to keep it fun!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Okay, I am prepared for the venomous comments from the pro-lesbian readers; but I really do enjoy stories where the protagonist convinces a girl leaning towards lesbianism to find the joys of heterosexual relationships.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 3 years ago

third time around, humorous love story, great setup, young lady figures out she's not a lesbian. They put on a show for Dad but can't fool him. Serious stories are ok but when you add a little humor they become great stories. Keep writing, please! As far as querism goes do what you want just don't throw in my face expecting me to support it. I'm a straight old 78 year old.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Absolutely delightful. Worth 5 of anybody's stars.

LA

Cito22Cito22about 3 years ago

One of the best ones if this type I have read so far. Brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Had me laughing! Just what I needed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I really loved it. If only real life was like that. Thanks.

kirei8kirei8about 3 years ago

The three E's: Excellent Entertainment with Elan!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is the third time of reading and it is as beutifull a story as I have read in a long time. It realy moved me. I wish it could have been me in the male role. Well done. With luv. JOHN.

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961about 3 years ago
Thumbs up

Good story had me smiling through most double high five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Not a great follower of Lesbian (or cuckold) stories, but it was well written with only a couple of stand out grammatical errors. It was still worth four stars

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Second Time Around

Still an excellent read, just plain fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

cooorny, terrible grammar. read the whole thing nonetheless. good language flow. erase this, i don´t care.

AFoolRushesInAFoolRushesInabout 3 years ago

I laughed all the way through this story. A light hearted romp, as they say, but they are good for the soul.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A well written story . I like it a lot. AAA+++

Gym52Gym52almost 3 years ago

Five stars.

A beautiful story, well told, thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was the best story I have read in twenty years!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I laughed more in this story then most!

The internal monologue was great!

tlevanssrtlevanssralmost 3 years ago

I wasn't sure when I first started reading it. But the more I read the more I enjoyed it. I laughed several times. Thought the ending was great. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I like your style of writing... effortless and funny. It feels like watching a romantic comedy.

Sausage17Sausage17almost 3 years ago

A lot of what I had to say has already been said, so I’ll just say this was hilarious.

MacHardyMacHardyalmost 3 years ago

Sweet, funny, sexy, cute, I like

SeaChangerSeaChangeralmost 3 years ago

Nice pace, easy read, feels good. First story of yours I have read ... now I'll read the rest.

Thank you. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

funny. Loved it 5*

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 3 years ago

Excellent!!

This is what you call a true love story. I woudn't have bought it either. But with a little convincing he was hook, line and sinker in love. Great tale.

Five Stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Carried off very well.

A nice twist.

5 ⭐️ Stars

Bill

enderlocke77enderlocke77almost 3 years ago

rolf so what happens when she turns back into a lesbian lol. not sure if ur character was confused ur if it is u. so was she Bi or a lesbian or straight?

phlxxlphlxxlalmost 3 years ago

Very good story. The plot reminds me of 'The Wedding Banquet' by Ang Lee.

I love the move so I live this story as well.

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

Nicely done. This was an enjoyable read. To enderlocke77, why the nitpicking? Stop being such a grump. This was a nice fantasy. 5 stars from me.

LT56linebackerLT56linebackeralmost 3 years ago

Sometimes, a guy can take care of business if he just keeps him mouth shut, and his ears open. 5 stars again. The Bear approves. Thanks, DAD.

Th BEAR

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, nicely told.

fredbrownfredbrownalmost 3 years ago

Liked this story, his actions made perfect sense to me and I was buying the whole thing. Not for me to worry about the sex pref thing as I just enjoyed the story and its twist since I'm as big a dufus as old Don.

DUBLXLDUBLXLalmost 3 years ago

Excellent read, sexy, emotional and a twist or two. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Carioca_ManCarioca_Manalmost 3 years ago

In Literotica's rows and columns of texts, especially an LW section, few stories have caused me a smile of satisfaction, so far, like this one.

The central idea of ​​a man devastated by his ex's betrayal, where he teams up with an affirmatively lesbian woman to help her clean the bar with her parents, didn't allow me to imagine the total change in direction the story took.

Elements of comedy, interspersed with those scenes from sugar water novels and hints of experiences of teenagers discovering themselves in love.

The sex itself, hardly "graphic", did not affect the interest in reading. The fact that Don had gone straight to the point, penetrating Candy and claiming her as his wife, ended her doubt as to whether she could compete with Candy's previous partner. And from her words: "My first time with a man, it was amazing", he knew there was nothing to worry about... Until his conversation with Cinthya. The result showed that being true always produces good results.

The best part is that the story had a lightness and an adequate cadence. If it had more pages and kept the beat, it would be easy to read.

Joined my roster of 4-star stories. And I don't usually offer that easily. The author showed that there can be light at the end of the tunnel, without the need to "burn the bitch" or bury some bodies.

And that living a good life is always the best way to get revenge on traitors. But that's just my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

There is no foreshadowing of candy and Don's love. Halfway in it is dropped on us like a ton of bricks. In fact you say they don't run in the same circles. So they basically know of each-other then she invites himself to her place she stays a few nights he gives the lesbian the 3 minutes of thunder two or three times and they love each other. I am quick to say "I love you". I have a disposition that you ought to try to love your enemy, and this has carryover in romance where two months in if I'm seeing strong indicators a woman cares about a relationship ill say it. I don't think its that big of a deal. The timetable these two have is nuts. Some things need to be thought through a bit and some redundancies cold be eliminated (an example is on page one you someone spoke and the tag to accent the dialogue sow we know how to read it was "said softly and sincerely" this could be collapsed into "murdered sincerely" or "softly insisted" or something to that effect.) I don't think its bad, just not polished and a bit rushed.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

One of my favorite LW stories ever. This is just a feel good story. Best character is Ben.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Honestly, the woman doesn't have to be a lesbian ,for a guy to have thoughts like his.

All she has to be is a good friend or someone he thinks is out of his league and start showing interest in him to have us over think how bad we can screw it up.🤣

usaretusaretalmost 3 years ago

Cute, and with a touch of reality to boot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Would have been great, if they hadn't gone from "barely know each other" to "madly in love" in less time than it takes to sneeze.

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

(6/2/2021)

This was my second read. Really loved this short story. Definitely one of my all-time favorites.

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