by leapyearguy
I am going to reread this story, when I am having a bad day!
Dude you made me laugh harder at this tale more than any of this genre ever has. Great story and I can only imagine the look on the Dad's face when has asked the question. Priceless!!
Unusual story here, and a lot of fun. It's always nice to poach one from the other team, and Candy sounds really sweet. Great story.
This it's the nth time I've read this and still love the humour.would love a post 2
This is the first of your stories I have read. You hit a home run with this story!!! Thanks.
What a pleasure it was to read this story, I loved it. I laughed out out when I read the analogy "slept like an insomniac in a bell tower". Simply brilliant. I'm a new reader on Literotica and have yet to read a better story. Great work.
Whenever I feel low, I read this story. Great humor. Simple story. Great writing. Please come up with more such stuff.
What a good story, I guess with him knowing Candy for the previous 5 years it was a quick as it appeared to be. I will be reading more of your work.
I can’t count how many times I’ve read this story; it’s just that enjoyable. It’s one of a handful that I’ve read where I can say that I’d love to see this translated to the big screen.
every time I read this one it hits my funny bone. big smiles every time
Perfect prequel to a kinky cuck story or BTB story in Loving Wives BTB, depending upon which way writer wants to go with it. Beautiful young wife with strong sex appetite who goes both ways, nerdy hubby. Mother-in-law obviously in play and perhaps dominant. Go 10 chapters with it.
Okay, l’ve re-read this story and I made a mistake in my first rating. This story is very enjoyable, funny and easy to understand. So I give it five stars ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
That’s all I have to say about 😁(Forrest Gump).
And don't listen to anon 08/02/20, there's no need to turn this lovely story into another mess like the rest of the cuck/loving wives story's.
I’ve read this several times and love it! My wife just asked what are you smiling about?
How long did the dad know for?
Also, I'm thinking she might actually be demisexual, or something...
I absolutely love this story. It's silly and sappy. It's completely improbable but for once I don't fuckng care. I come back to this story once in a while when I need a jolt of pure fantasy and happiness.
Reading again. There is nothing bad anyone can say about this story. It is one of the best ever.
Read for 2nd time, and as good as first. I somewhat question the likelihood and believability of the father and mother's antics, but it was a minor sidelight to what was an interesting story.
Great little love story. A little humor makes any story a lot better. Very good, keep writing. This was my second reading and it was just as funny and good as the first.
It's unbelievable 26thNC and I read the same stories, but usually I disagree with everything they/he says, I have hi m down as a bitter twisted man who hates women because he has been badly hurt by one. How amazing then that I agree with every word he says about this story. Perhaps I have done him/her a disservice for which I apologise.
Beautiful. What a wonderful story. I was in threir with him totalye as he said,. Woman who can understand them. You can't live with them, You can't live without them. Again I sayBeutifull. LOVE. John xxxxxxx
What is wrong with these butch lesbos commenters, who keep running this story down! Hey lesbo dickheads, Candy wasn’t a lesbian, she was bi-sexual. Get with the times. Lesbos aren’t the only other game in town! These butch lesbians can’t stand the fact that a bisexual woman could find a man of her dreams! You butch lesbos go find a butch lesbo for your next partner.
Everyone is commenting about how the lesbians complaining in the comments should shut up. The people calling out the homophobia in the comments are well within their right. STFU heteros. You have no place to comment on us speaking up against homophobia.
As for the comments by the faggots and their useful idiots, the sodomite lifestyle is toxic. Get over yourselves.
Really enjoyed your fun story. Nothing like reading with a smile on ones face. Five from me. Thanks for sharing.
DogFuzz...
Fun loving story, moderate sex makes it enjoyable, light hearted and funny, which I neede because of an earlier read that was a bit of a downer although well written. Good Job!
I just read 4 stories in a row and loved every one. This one was a cross between a hallmark movie, internet porn and Monty Python! It was truly and thoroughly entertaining... Magnificent storytelling. Thank You 5*****
Not as descriptive as I was looking for but really nicely written. Gave 5 star for the wonderful humor.
Cute!
We don’t get enough stories with goofball humor. A healthy four stars!
Top story, re-reading for the umteenth time and loving it every time.
Very, very good. Good dialog, even snappy. Lots of surprises. Plenty of humor. A very enjoyable little story.
Very enjoyable story, loved the ending! Just like an old married man too funny!
The humor, the love, the titilation, a really fun story. Even better the second time around as I had a smile on my face knowing what was coming. Keep writing, we need more humor and a little sex isn't bad either.
Great Story, I loved it, even when I thought it was all going to explode( or should that be implode?...your guess is as good as mine) 'Dad' was written as a clueless old geezer in the beginning, I'm glad the character was given an appropriate intelligence eventually, as the father of girls it is not difficult to know how this goes, and say the right thing at the right time! Thank You 5***** and a 'favorite story' acknowledgement
Okay, I am prepared for the venomous comments from the pro-lesbian readers; but I really do enjoy stories where the protagonist convinces a girl leaning towards lesbianism to find the joys of heterosexual relationships.
third time around, humorous love story, great setup, young lady figures out she's not a lesbian. They put on a show for Dad but can't fool him. Serious stories are ok but when you add a little humor they become great stories. Keep writing, please! As far as querism goes do what you want just don't throw in my face expecting me to support it. I'm a straight old 78 year old.
This is the third time of reading and it is as beutifull a story as I have read in a long time. It realy moved me. I wish it could have been me in the male role. Well done. With luv. JOHN.
Not a great follower of Lesbian (or cuckold) stories, but it was well written with only a couple of stand out grammatical errors. It was still worth four stars
cooorny, terrible grammar. read the whole thing nonetheless. good language flow. erase this, i don´t care.
I laughed all the way through this story. A light hearted romp, as they say, but they are good for the soul.
I wasn't sure when I first started reading it. But the more I read the more I enjoyed it. I laughed several times. Thought the ending was great. Thanks for sharing.
I like your style of writing... effortless and funny. It feels like watching a romantic comedy.
A lot of what I had to say has already been said, so I’ll just say this was hilarious.
Nice pace, easy read, feels good. First story of yours I have read ... now I'll read the rest.
Thank you. 5*
Excellent!!
This is what you call a true love story. I woudn't have bought it either. But with a little convincing he was hook, line and sinker in love. Great tale.
Five Stars
rolf so what happens when she turns back into a lesbian lol. not sure if ur character was confused ur if it is u. so was she Bi or a lesbian or straight?
Very good story. The plot reminds me of 'The Wedding Banquet' by Ang Lee.
I love the move so I live this story as well.
Nicely done. This was an enjoyable read. To enderlocke77, why the nitpicking? Stop being such a grump. This was a nice fantasy. 5 stars from me.
Sometimes, a guy can take care of business if he just keeps him mouth shut, and his ears open. 5 stars again. The Bear approves. Thanks, DAD.
Th BEAR
Liked this story, his actions made perfect sense to me and I was buying the whole thing. Not for me to worry about the sex pref thing as I just enjoyed the story and its twist since I'm as big a dufus as old Don.
In Literotica's rows and columns of texts, especially an LW section, few stories have caused me a smile of satisfaction, so far, like this one.
The central idea of a man devastated by his ex's betrayal, where he teams up with an affirmatively lesbian woman to help her clean the bar with her parents, didn't allow me to imagine the total change in direction the story took.
Elements of comedy, interspersed with those scenes from sugar water novels and hints of experiences of teenagers discovering themselves in love.
The sex itself, hardly "graphic", did not affect the interest in reading. The fact that Don had gone straight to the point, penetrating Candy and claiming her as his wife, ended her doubt as to whether she could compete with Candy's previous partner. And from her words: "My first time with a man, it was amazing", he knew there was nothing to worry about... Until his conversation with Cinthya. The result showed that being true always produces good results.
The best part is that the story had a lightness and an adequate cadence. If it had more pages and kept the beat, it would be easy to read.
Joined my roster of 4-star stories. And I don't usually offer that easily. The author showed that there can be light at the end of the tunnel, without the need to "burn the bitch" or bury some bodies.
And that living a good life is always the best way to get revenge on traitors. But that's just my opinion
There is no foreshadowing of candy and Don's love. Halfway in it is dropped on us like a ton of bricks. In fact you say they don't run in the same circles. So they basically know of each-other then she invites himself to her place she stays a few nights he gives the lesbian the 3 minutes of thunder two or three times and they love each other. I am quick to say "I love you". I have a disposition that you ought to try to love your enemy, and this has carryover in romance where two months in if I'm seeing strong indicators a woman cares about a relationship ill say it. I don't think its that big of a deal. The timetable these two have is nuts. Some things need to be thought through a bit and some redundancies cold be eliminated (an example is on page one you someone spoke and the tag to accent the dialogue sow we know how to read it was "said softly and sincerely" this could be collapsed into "murdered sincerely" or "softly insisted" or something to that effect.) I don't think its bad, just not polished and a bit rushed.
One of my favorite LW stories ever. This is just a feel good story. Best character is Ben.
Honestly, the woman doesn't have to be a lesbian ,for a guy to have thoughts like his.
All she has to be is a good friend or someone he thinks is out of his league and start showing interest in him to have us over think how bad we can screw it up.🤣
Would have been great, if they hadn't gone from "barely know each other" to "madly in love" in less time than it takes to sneeze.
(6/2/2021)
This was my second read. Really loved this short story. Definitely one of my all-time favorites.