All Comments on 'Allyson Ch. 06'

by carvohi

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Don't like the direction this is going

Also don't like that the mother seems to care more for a strange and stupid girl than her own son. By that I mean the line about if she breaks Paul's heart then they still want her to stay with them what rot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Took a nose dive

Story was going well until Dr. Brolyn showed up. That put it in the toilet. Should have waited for the next chapter.

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