All Comments on 'BDSM, Inc. Ch. 01'

We thought this was going to be a good story about BDSM, but we had a tough time reading it as we found ourselves the editor. If you are going to write and post here and if you are proud of your work, then please edit your story. The one we liked the most is where she, Angela, kicked him in the ship.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NO VOTE for POOR GRAMMAR

Find someone who speaks English to edit your story. Too many mistakes are too distracting.

I would have given the story a higher rating but I have to agree with the other two comments. There were just too many mistakes. However, I would like to read the next installments if you can get someone to help you with the editing. It wasn't the content itsef, it was just the mistakes.