by homealone_447
are you going to write more? please do, i love the colony, it is an awsome idea, can i join. (security manager)... ;-]...
from anonymous...
Not a good ending. Either the alien wins or humanity does. Sam has money and a girl. He also has an ass for the alien to mind control. Elderly women outlive husbands and would benefit from rejuvenation. Young breeders recruted by enticement. Clear skin, bigger breasts, voluptuous bodies. But parents may be a problem. Orphans? You must control the government, the police, and the military. At the same time you must Branch out into different countries to insure world domination. Then go back into space to start all over again. Is it possible to tie this into other stories of yours? This is my first read of your work.