by PhantomOp
after considerable training. His mistakes, while entertaining, were avoidable with instruction. Embarrassing people is not good humour.
WTF! Angie was talking about Pretty Woman, how the fuck did you then co-relate being a hooker to being a sex toy?
I looked under the authors name, and didn't see a chapter 4.. anxiously awaiting for it!
Life has taken many strange twists and turns in the past year, but I am happy to say that chapter 4 has just been submitted, and chapter 5 is in progress.
Wow!!! Great yarn but nothing since June?????? Come on, we know about keeping the readers in suspense to have them come back, but we're starting to age here!!! LOL!
Please finish this soon!
Great start! Well written and with great promise. I really hope that there will be alot more to this story.
I agree with Chalkman that you have a really great start for a continuing story. So many possible ways you can go when you get to London.... Waiting to hear.
I hope you are not like some other writers and leave your readers with our tounges hanging out for more.please be true to your profession and finish this great story. ron from the U.S.A.
I'm waiting on the rest of the story. I do hope you are planning more!!
The story is good and I can't wait for more. Please write more until it's finished.
A very good read, one of the best I have read on this site. You have crafted a complex story line with variables that could go in many different directions. I am looking forward to your next installment in this saga.
This is great so far. I particularly like how Thomas is realizing that his actions have costs to himself and others.
Please finish this.
Impressive ending, I'm very interested in this series so far! Keep it up!