All Comments on 'Commanding Cara'

Good for EROTIC HORROR not so much for nonhuman.

Definitely erotic horror or nonconsent/reluctance. have someone read over your work just to catch basic grammatical errors,etc. It is definitely for a person with a certain taste, no pun intended :), so I think another category would have been better.

ok story, learn how to write.

kinda hard to read, there's a lot of grammatical errors, sorry.