All Comments on 'Count Down To Moonlight'

Really enjoying this initial chapter hope to read more, liking the chemistry already between these two. Max

Will you write another chapter? :) This sounds interesting so far and I would like to read more. And a bit longer? lol

I enjoyed the story. It reminds me of one of Sherrilyn Kenyon's books where a girl is handcuffed and in a cell with one of her 'Dark Hunters'. Anyhow, I look forward to seeing where it grows and I hope you can give us more info about the characters either through them talking or some other way. I'd also like to know where this room is. I assume it is at the location of the party but am not sure.

There are some tense errors and other small grammatical stuff, so if you can get someone to check it over for you that would be good. That way those small things don't take away from a good story. Hope you will keep working on it and give us another chapter soon.

Strange circumstances to meet under, but I don't think either of them are too upset! They seem to be taking it really well. Hell of a first date. Most people don't have to do the coed bathroom trick till their married! LOL! It looks like they will have to find a way to entertain themselves until someone let's them out or the wolf is out of the bag. Hope you write some more. I like it.

love the story great writing and so very exciting to read different from your other stories, but good none the less.

Ok nice start and good narritive but some pretty basic editting would have gone a long way.

Lovely start, more to come hopefully?

i look forward to more chapters

Great beginning. Great title. Absolutely loved it!

Yup.....liked the start...can't wait to go on.

I do like the begining of this story;can't wait to continue.I just hope its not going to be one of those stories that I'm going to be abboyed with because its not completed LOL

Can't wait to know what happens next.

This series is super long,but I'm curious and very excited to find out why these two were,chained at the hip so to speak lol

And oh my....Every full blooded males certainly know all about morning wood and how hard it really gets(no pun intended) and with Duncan/Keely...dear god! She's definately gonna have one hell of an experience in the upcoming(no pun intended again;) chapters again and best believe,I'll be pumping along while reading.....