All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

That 'dirty, smelly arabs' raping the good white christian bit was uncalled for and totally off-putting. Probably shouldn't go looking for political correctness in this specific story genre but come on, racism was easily avoidable in this story but you decided to hammer it home

We all must choose our own destiny. When we are true to our selves it always works

When we know we cannot lie to our self, our lives are potistive for other as well. And it was fun read as well. Thanks

Racism was a bit uncalled for and unnecessary

So.... a well written story and suddenly extreme racism. From nowhere... could not get though that part...

to everyone who commented on the racism, the story was set moderately before people truly cared about racism. I thought it was fine in the story. (and btw I am not racist)

Fantastic would have given more stars if possible. The comments about the racism are uncalled for as this was written in a time when all the politically correct crap of today was nonexistent. Plus as a father of a 19 year old daughter ( who had tried to convince him from her 12th birthday to her 16th that he should take her virginity ( I finally gave her what she so badly wanted on her 16th birthday )) nothing would make me want to hold and protect my baby-girl then the thought of some dirty skeezy import trying to rape my little girl be it Arab, Mexican or Canadian!

I'm from the south and have been around racism my whole life idk if I was just so into the story I didn't catch it but I didn't see any racism in this story. Please do keep writing you are a great author loved this story.

I just reread this story again - and will probably read it again and again. I only wish I had to ability to put in words how this story has grabbed me - pulled me into the lives of these two people. Thank you so much for another good read!

I've never been politically correct & calling a spade a spade has never been an issue with me. What was said regarding race was quite true. Americans are hated in many other countries simply for being American. I am very fair skinned & have always been blond (until a few years ago following a surgical procedure) with green eyes. I lived in HI for 3 years and saw lots of discrimination against me because of my race. Not by the Samoans but by the Japanese predominately. I actually had women Refuse to wait on me in well respected establishments simply because I was a white woman. It's shocking to me how people can get offended at the dumbest things yet be accepting of what I would deem unacceptable behavior. Incest is not my thing but I had heard about your story & wanted to read it for myself to see what you offered as a writer. I do think you need to proof your stories a bit more before submitting as there were grammatical errors etc BUT The way you wrote was erotic!! If it hadn't been the incest relationship (as I said, not my thing) I would've given it a much higher rating than I did. As it was, your story affected me. The way you phrased and fit your words together had a very profound affect on my libido. I couldn't help but be aroused during the reading of your story. When I feel myself Pulse simply reading a story...it's a well put together erotic tale. I plan to read more of your stories and hope to find one that is right up my alley so to speak. Good luck on future endeavors and glad to hear your health has improved.

One of the best stories of this genre I've read.

And yeah, back in the 90's, Political Correctness wasn't politically correct.

What the hell has happened to this Nation?

Oh yeah, all the PC Bullshit has fractured us as a nation.

Sad times, for all of us who remember when people had thicker skins.

My first story I've read on this site. Definitely not into incest or condone it, your story tells how a woman's lust for someone can leave men in a very weak position about saying no..!!

Pete..!

Who's jason

Story is lame Malachi written by Malachi 6/17/17 You didn't write this malachi

Jason an ass whole malachi

How worried should you be is what he's playing who's marry how many times did he rape her what's the date

Take my phone away see what I get get

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Don't remove these posts

Your racism is appalling, it was a huge huge turnoff

The stuff about Arabs ruined the story, it made me think of Stephanie as a stupid asshole

I absolutely love this story, very good job on the details. It definitely got me going.

At least my 2nd or 3rd read- so well written! And "No" I did not find it racist - I am a realist- read the papers!

wonderful

story

The racism ruined it. Get a life .

I for one loved the comments about the mudslimes in the story. Also what a read! One of the better stories I've read in a long time.

i love it,

The Arab bit is just, no. Just, stereotypes in stories are just shitty.

You should have continued with the exploration of your daughters inner depths with their father, their ages are perfect for the story to have continued

Racism ruined it

You get a 5 from me, not because you asked for it, but because you worked your ass off for it. I don't mean the sex scenes, which were adequate, but I mean the use of language, which was superb. There was very limited dialogue in this story, which could have hurt it. However, your short monologues saved it, and moved the story along briskly. You used the part of the waiter bringing dinner into their suite, brilliantly. Instead of focusing attention on the old man, who is attempting to place plates on the table, without breaking them, She is using her beautiful young body, exposing herself to him, trying to get a rise out of her father.If that doesn't rate a 5/10/20, I don't know what does.

Your work on this piece was inspired, beautiful, and emotional. You expressed love and lust artfully. If not for the festering gangrenous cyst you used for your nightmare scene, I would gladly give you a five. However your completely gratuitous expression of racism distroyed an otherwise perfect story. While I think you were attempting to express the cultural bias of the time, it was in very poor taste, and unnecessary for the plot. Any nightmare would have worked, such as being chased through the woods by an unseen horror. Rocks cutting your feet as thorny branches tore at your night clothes. Eventually leaving you naked and bleeding as the horror closed in on you. Unless racism is at the core of the story itself, the subject has zero busness in a love story. Rework the nightmare scene and republish, then you will get your five.

incest children? incest wedding? racism? love the south...

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I can only describe this as the PERFECT incest story !

I love it. It's the perfect father/daughter love story. It has such a happy ending. So happy for the 2 of you.

I enjoyed every single story I read thus far. I read most stories under Incest/Taboo and yours are by far hands down the best. Well that's my opinion. Sadly im almost done reading your stories. Im trying to savor them. I'm anticipating your next story. Can't wait to see what your beautiful mind comes up with next. I too am a writer, though my stories are more focused on Erotic Couplings. I do love the taboo nature of your father/daughter love stories. Scrath that all your stories. ;) Makes me want to know more about you. Yes i said it. To be in the presence of "scouries" would be a dream come true!!! Okay. Im done rambling. Don't ever stop writing. Ill enjoy reading every last one.

~Jess~

Racist asshole. Nobody fucking cares if you're blond and white, get over it.

It's super amazing 😍😂 i love how she teases her daddy and i just love the ending 😍

The word daddy is such a cringy word. Specially if it’s a grown ass adult using it

Have you ever had the thought that he might feel attracted to your daughters in the future?

Read it again after a year or two. Still a good story. A daughter's dream of Europe cumming truth.

Fun to read;

It was fun to read even tho we knew what would happen. A lot of excitement in her thoughts. As a man I would like to know, to think that in this day I could be loved that much, that strongly to someone that close..........Good job!

A (big) penis does help tho.......

In 1994 the only international flight out of Pittsburgh was the daily British Airways flight to Gatwick.

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I thought it was a great story. Kept me thinking what would happen next. Keep up the great work

You have not only fascinated me with your "attention to detail" so brilliantly delivered but with how you managed to make something so taboo become intriguing. I was hooked from the first line. This is the third story I've read on Literotica and this story alone is why I am now a long time member. Thank you. I am no longer ashamed of my own desires.

great story just needs more sex. along build for a short sex scene

Most enjoyable and credible.

This story has high hopes but there is no other real conflict for the heroine to overcome besides some vague societal taboo. Shakespeare would have been disappointed.

fulfilling human needs its very real

jen

Great from start to finish!

I am cun-fussed as to when the daughter knew she was pregnant . , is the only thing I would like to know , did he push thru her "cervix" , or just let nature take its course ?

Pure dumb shit. "Oh the big bad Arabs hate us for being American" In 1994.

Stupid ass dumb racist white trash.

Didn’t even bother to read past the Arab shit. I’m so fucking disappointed in this, so I had to comment and not usually ghost read like I do. This is racist bloody trash and it needs to stop. Absolutely agree w the one user below

Get your fucking shit together man and stop being a racist pig.

The bullshit about Arabs killed the story. Pathetic.

First of all it's FICTION. So if Steffie wants to invent a nightmare about some bad guys and they're Arabs, so what?

Second of all, it's 1994, so who should Steffie pick - the Russians?, the Germans?, the Chinese?, the Jews?, the Romans?

Third of all, what year was it that the Iranians took over the US Embassy and held 444 people as hostages? Oh, and their leaders referred to the United States as "the Great Satan"? Oh yeah, that was 1979!

Fourth of all, gee, was the movie "Taken" racist because the daughter was kidnapped to be sold to Arabs?

Quit being so fucking sanctimonious and politically correct!

Who can blame innocent American girls for being scared of the big bad arabs ? They are terrorists and rapists. He did not call them rag heads or goat fuckers, which I am inclined to do.

Very thoughtful and interestingly written, A report of the most intimate erotic feelings of that young lady were beautifully dialogued. A happy ending for a perfect story.

I couldn't read past the racist B.S. What a way to ruin what could have been a good story.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Some descriptive words were a bit much but nothing that broke the immersion.

For the people calling racist BS, a teenage girl inventing a story off the top of her head to throw off suspicions of why she's sleeping with her father? Yeah I probably couldn't do better. Characters are not always indicators of the authors opinions.

Dude, what are you being racist for? The story would have been much better if you did not put that racist crap in there. I am not arabic but it makes me so angry when I see racism, a HUGE turnoff.

Congrats! ;)

it had me on the edge of my seat.

so close to as it is when things are right and running well

What a beautiful story with superb pacing and strong depictions of father and daughter. There are numerous grammar errors which means that you didn't have someone edit it before you posted it. Nevertheless it earned the high praise it received.

Loved every heartbeat, both hers and mine. With her father giving in so easily, it's obvious that she had so tempted him with little flashes of her bottom and her nipples to the point of no return. Very few men could reject such temptation especially if their daughters are attractive.

Thank you for the pleasant journey.

This story seemed to be so real that it was a pleasure to read. It was not the raw sex

of most incest stories, but the true love of the family relationship.

Hands up, the best story of any theme I've ever read.

This story is so well-written, for the most part, and I was completely in the moment as I read. Unfortunately, the weird and unexpected racist blurb about Arab men with “smelly beards” who hate blonde American Christians took me out of the story. I continued reading, but never quite shook the nonchalant use of a racist trope. I understand that this is a piece of fiction, but that doesn’t mean it shouldn’t be held to high standards. Relying on racist descriptions to move your plot along is simply lazy writing. The stories we tell matter. How we tell them matters.

How did everyone they knew accept them as married when they knew them as father and daughter?

I read this story about ten years ago, and was dumbfounded at 1) its cavalier, non sequitur and unnecessary use of an ugly racist trope and 2) the author’s obvious lack of research/knowledge about Harvard medical school admission. Neither were needed for the plot. But it’s disturbing that, in nearly 13 years this story has been on the site, the author has never amended/updated the outdated, offensive, bigoted motif of Steff’s “nightmare” ... Especially since the “nightmare” wasn’t real, and never comes up again in the story!

Fuck you’re boring...

Scouries, you’re the best author on this site!

Love sooo much

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Very well-written and detailed. Certainly worth reading.

To the blah blah why the racist nightmare blah blah complainers.....shut the fuck up bitch, ain’t nobody give a half a shit if your feelings are hurt or you lost your little throb for a moment. It’s scouries story to tell.... go cry elsewhere. You sit here and attempt to judge it like you are some fancy wine connoisseur. Spoiler alert, you are not. You are, in fact, just another reader of taboo smut. Perhaps very giftedly written smut albeit.

Thanks for writing for us and sorry for the other childish bitches on here.

This story is really a great one. I love how it ended. You wrote one amazing story thank you.

Great and really interesting story. I like it.

This is a truly wonderful presentation of expressed love and finally expressed and realized deep love and admiration. A daughter and father who have realized their love can only be satisfied by mutual acceptance.

Thanks for your beautiful story.

A beautiful livestory

Just a well crafted, classy story that had me interested and entertained, start to finish. When I read stories I try to get a mental picture of the players, and I had a strong mental picture of Stephanie to go along with the story

I'm curious... this sounds like it could have been a POSSIBLE sequel to "Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned... just curious if that was done on purpose...

I loved it. Sounds like it could have been real. I liked the reluctance of Daddy at first, and then his gentle forcefulness in the end. Well done

Wow, I think the suspense, the dance between the daughter's willingness and the father's reluctance, was amazing and made this story much more exciting!

I loved the story overall. However, I was really turned off at times by the Racism and racial stereotypes. You're a good enough writer to not have to force that part in there. The "Blonde, Christian, American" emphasis just made it hurt worse.

This was a beautiful and really sexy story, thanks!! I just hope your husband knows, accepts and enjoys the loving relationship you have with your father. Your husband willing sharing you with your daddy is a forever love. You can have them independently and sometimes enjoy both your daddies together, inside you at the same time. Having your two favorite men, your two daddies, both cumming inside your pussy, their come mixing together in their naughty little girl, you will never come better. Then all three of you sleep in the same bed, having a daddy on your either side.

I really enjoyed this story . I felt it had the proper amount of Everything . 5 Stars from me ..

i was getting really horny until you mentioned the ugly Arab men. I am Arab and that was racist. Also, they are all circumcised. but i did cum after all so thanks good stuff.

The 'ugly Arab men' comment was just to push her daddy's protective buttons. It doesn't make it racist. The ugly descriptor, well she could hardly say she was being raped by handsome Arab men, then daddy would have thought she was having a fantasy and just jerking his chain. Hehe. She could have said ugly black men, jewish men, polish men, irish men, white men (overly generic) etc. people NEVER give it a second thought if it's a description of anybody else, then get all 'offended' if they fit in the box. People are too damned sensitive these days. I'm Polish, btw, so you can imagine the shit I've heard in my life, hehe! If it's not aimed at me personally I don't easily get offended. 99.9% of the time there's no hate or malice involved.

I mean it was kinda hot towards the end but what the fuck

It was good at the end but the way the girl was written was a little much. She got accepted to Harvard yet she’s apparently as dumb as a box of rocks. That and the constant “daddy” kind of killed it for me, reminds me of those cheesy 2 hour porn movies no one can ever get through.

This racist, and so typically American BS, crap -

"They wanted to rape me Daddy, despoil me because I'm an American.... "

- should not be permitted here. Just who the fuck do you think you are?

Is bijna een copie van onze beleving! Twee schattige dochtertjes hebben we eraan overgehouden. Mijn dichter mijn mooie lieve vrouw

She didn’t seem very smart to begin with, and almost all, if not all, med programs accept people after a bachelors degree not straight out of high school. This part of the story was the most ridiculous thing, with the details of her dream and her baby talk too over the top. Story was good, writing was good, but a little more research or a character that would be believable to be accepted into led school straight out of high school would be more realistic. That’s all. .

I loved your story so much, I have been thinking endlessly about my Daddy who is no longer with me, I can remember being 22 standing over him wishing, It never happened. your story brought my dreams to a lovely climax. Thank you x

Really? You're reading incest porn, yet you're complaining about racism? Really?

French isn't a race it's a nationality, and they're known for their rudeness, (along with surrendering to the Germans), esp to Americans.

I need to be fucked by daddy

This story had amazing potential, until the racist garbage in the “nightmare”. So disappointing.

My husband is Arabic, from Egypt. I loved the rest of the story but the "nightmare" really really pissed me off.

I really enjoyed every piece of this story. Very interesting, it's so unusual but wish I could see myself in that scenario for real.