All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

I love occasionally rereading this story, it's always so delicious and amazing! The author really did a spinning, erotic fairytale with this one!

I wish folks would just read the story and understand the context and tense of the story and quit screaming racist over that one bit. Ugh. If she had said any other 'race' somebody would complain, however if she had said something like ' big, ugly, fat and smelly white guys' nobody would make a damned peep.

The POINT of it was to use more descriptive and colorful wording to increase her Daddy's protective nature. Neither the girl, or author need be racist here, and most likely aren't. Someone will disagree. So is the author racist if he's Arabic and writing about raping little blonde white girls? Aaah. Quit assuming you know about the author, his or her intent or beliefs and forcing your one size fits all opinion on the world, expecting everyone to change things just because you don't like something. Hell, you sit here reading stories that you enjoy yet there are lots of others with 'opinions' just like yours that would like to see them all disappear. Think hard before you speak and try and look at the bigger picture. Not that much to ask.

It was really well written but had totally unneccesary racism

I really enjoyed this story, pretty well done, but the racism factor was just so unnecessary, and really gross. I would have loved to give the author a higher score, hopefully in the future they will realize racism makes a good story bad, not the other way around.

In spite of the incredibly eco-centric personality of the daughter, I enjoyed the daughter and her taking hr father for life. The little nightmare story was merely a distraction, and could have been deleted without losing anything. Thanx for the Read, even after all these years,

I wonder if Daddy will end up having sex with his new daughters. He is still young enough!

Incest is actually kinda my fetish. What is making me "click away" is the unnecessary aryan superiority espoused by the the girl and unrefuted by her dad.

What sucks is, I like your writing, a lot.

wow, did you write this with the hopes of spreading disgusting racist garbage to people who just wanted an enjoyable dirty story?

Jesus.

Everything was going so well until you had to bring that racist BS into it. All those racist statements were a little too specific, almost as if you hold those yourself. You could have painted the “bad men” as vile without factoring race into it. The fact that you think you HAD to bring up their race means you believe being Arab is vile. Also the “uncircumcised” part made me laugh. That’s like saying a bunch of Jews are uncircumcised. It’s not even factually accurate. Good job reinforcing racist narratives that gave your story no addd benefit. Gross.

Your story is awesome except the absolutely vile racist comments. There was no need to describe the race or the "uncircumcised" penis, you could have left it at "they were disgusting men"

where do these inbred morons called anonymous get the racist BS from... I read the story and enjoyed every word and I didnot see anything of the sort... I think these people play with their puds... Jealous of you because they are incapable of writing a good story... Keep up the good work and piss on the anonymous people.

dukeofearl@gmx.com

A well-told story, even the flashbacks worked fairly well. I was a bit put off by the Arab references. But the entire piece was redeemed totally by the delightful phrase "gate to my womb". Thanks. A five.

This story was amazing except the racist part. You could have described the evil men in a different way without including race. Just a bit of advice.

So the story ad good plot, I enjoyed its build up to when he finally let loose but the issue that stuck out to me the most was the BLATANT prejudice and racism towards Arab people, you could've just said they were bad men trying to hurt her, calling their uncircumcised penis's disgusting, and even describing the Arab people as disgusting Arabs will never sit right with me, there was no need for it and I have a feeling that comes from a deep place of internalized racism. Work on that.

I really enjoyed most of this story and it would have been a five for me, except I just can't commit to five stars for a story that gives a perfect blonde little girl a fake nightmare about "dirty, smelly uncircumcised Arab/foreigner rapists who hate me because in American" it was so completely outside the realm of necessity, and so blatantly racist that it actually ruined the story for me. I don't care how nice and sweet someone is on the surface, if they think of "foreigners" that way, they're just not good people.

Also lol@the anonymous guy bitching about the other people who commented anonymously. If y'all don't see stereotyping people based on a nationality or skin color as racist then you're definitely the idiots perpetuating it.

Oh PHUCK YES!!! So hot ! more please?

Truly inspiring, loving relationship. Gustav Flaubert was quoted with; “Language is a cracked kettle on which we beat out tunes to make bears dance to, while all the time we long to move the stars to pity.” He was indicating that our words are never completely understood by others. But Scouries has found that perfect combination of prose to express a captivating love story between two people, that transcends the limits of societal standards, and has the whimsical splendor of a real life fantasy. Heartfelt applause and cheers!

Wonderfully written, please more like this........thanks

Like others have said, the xenophobia and Islamophobia ruined the entire story for me. Also, the majority of Arabs *do not* circumcise their children. Too bad you're a racist, as the rest of the story had promise.

I would've fucking loved this story, but the whole Arab fake dream was bullshit. You can't be racist like that.

Why does racism have to be your go to word. Would it make it less racist if the rapists were Americans? Or Germans? Or Asians? For fucks sake, get over yourself (ves) and pay attention. The Arabs weren’t the focus of the story. But you, in your pathetic little minds decide that political correctness outweighs the story. Dreams can be haunted by something as simple as a movie. If she’d dreamt that Freddy Kruger was the one raping, which “ism” would you have made reference to? Instead of looking at the bigger picture, that being a loving relationship between two adults, you run screaming because of a few fictional character references. Get over yourself. Try paying attention to what matters. Better yet, show your name along with your criticism, instead of hiding behind the mask of anonymous. If political correctness is your problem, you’re obviously reading at the wrong site. You’re part of the problems humanity faces today, and also part of the reason I detest admitting I’m one of you, with regard to being human.

This is the second time that I have read this story. It's a great story. True love without the judgements of other people. I wish my own daughter was like that.

That was a beautiful story. I only wished I had that lind of relationship with my own dad. ❤️

I really loved your story. You did what you had too go win him over.

Sex with your Father is warm and beautiful. Many people do it, but hide their love. But look how beautiful your love for each other turned out.

Please tell us more. Such fabulous sex with him, being pregnant with his baby. So beautiful

This was an absolutely amazing story it had me rubbing my clit like crazy, but the part about the Arabs was so messed up. Your story would’ve been amazing without that

I liked all of the story just as it was written. So hot. Could see a chapter or two, following the good doctor’s vacations and pregnancies. Would be so hot.

Why are you racist towards middle eastern people?

Yeah I couldn't read past the blatant racism to words middle easterners. Like wtf, the first thing she thought to say was she had a bad dream about "ugly Arabs raping her because she's a blonde, pretty American & Christian?!?!" This is just like white women falsely accusing black men of the same thing. You just lost a reader and I hope many more if this is your writing style.

Racist

I liked this story though the first 2 pages were long and boring but the arab part FUCK YOU HOW DARE You

Racist. Blatantly, completely, and for no actual reason really. Why would someone actually write that out. Ew

So very well written! I have had nightmares of being raped by middle eastern men also. Nothing against their race at all!!!! I love your style. So romantic. Duch a great fantasy!!!!

In the early part of her seduction she made the mistake of talking to the Dr about her school friends lusting for him. This would be bound to unsettle him, the good name of a professional man is easily lost especially with a lustful daughter too intoxicated to think straight. This would unsettle the ambience and threaten success. For me, she was not together enough and for one of her supposed intelligence not sufficiently aware of the need to preserve his professional hauteur. She plainly could have brought a lot of damage onto his reputation unaware as she was of the issues. Her talking of uncircumcised Arabs would have instantly flagged with her father as a ploy for long cuddles in bed and a need to stay by her. In fact, nothing happened to her. There were no Arabs. He would know about the importance of circumcision among such peoples. He would have been aware of the direction of travel at that point and simply let the future roll out, and helping the roll out by leaving Steffi in charge of the holiday arrangements.

Ideally, she would be more grown up and able to show that she was aware of the issues, preserving his dignity, but who, when they were alone, simply melted and became Steffi.

If I was Daddy I would be feeling a great deal of foreboding until we got clear away from the US. The wedding could almost be seen as blackmail. He was very much in her power at that point and as a scorned women could have brought a trainload of trouble to him.

The pearls were a nice touch. They bring sophistication and so would tend to help the illusion that she was a few years older.

RACIST and not ok!

Racist? Don't think so. Those were youg girl nightmares, valid ones, possibly biased by public events and preconcepts. By all means I liked it.

This shit is racist

I love it, course this kind of relationship has been going on since the first Homo sapiens appeared on this planet 4.5 million years ago, more common than u all think, not just father and daughters, amongst other related family members too, 1st, 2nd cousins, etc

I have read this story so many times over! I love, love, love, love your writing. I wish you were still writing.

I wish I could write like that! Wow! Beautiful form and grammar.

Dude. Normally don't vote or comment but seeing all your comments I had to comment. I'm 100% not racist. Actually I have close 50% Native-American on 1 side. The other side is a weird mix of German, guess Redneck (not sure exactly where from, just yrs in southern states & NC. There all flat ass area where you see farmland for what seems 100 miles in all directions. Yet NC & another in the mountains, guess we are rednecks & hillbillies?), then Fench & a couple others. So 1 side mostly Native-American, other side Mutt. Seeing it's 15 years later, the guy say Latino's would be running the country & whatever else, well you didn't see Trump becoming President! Actually if anyone 15 yrs ago said they could see that, they'd be in a rubber room. My family has Mexicans, African-American's, gays & tons more in it! I don't agree with the gay's but, that's a religion issues not that I hate them or wish harm. Just wish they would be in a man & woman relationship. Before any comments, yes I grasp incest issues are against religion too. Not something I'd act on I just enjoy the stories that have plots, actually have build up (not the dad came in bang me the end or brother banged me the end. Now that I've dragged out my comment, here's my point! 1. It was a damn dream for 1. If she's young & says it about a dream, she gets a half pass. 2. Most all Arabs are uncircumcised! 3. I got to parachute a few times, fast rope several times, walk a shitload, & drive, be a passenger in or sit on, hang on to & other things to numerous vehicles! That said most Arabs I encountered stunk, didn't bathe, had beards, weren't circumcised (only know because they were nude, tagged, fingerprinted, retina scanned & more! I on one side for 50% of them feel sorry for some of them, wish they had help & more. The other 50% I wish we used large weaponry, leveled it all & let the Bezos & Walton assholes build Walmart's & Amazon shopping stores, shipping fulfilment factory's & wtfe! Then they'd have jobs! Outsourcing call centers was great! We now get some things answered & fixed or we can't understand who we are talking to, get credit cards info stolen & much more. Thank you India, Jamaica, China, Russia & more! Also not a huge flag flier either. Fought for the men beside me in our 5 to 11 person units, unless we met up with men & woman in battalions, on ships, on bases & more, then it was all them. Never the Prez, Congress, Pentagon, pencil pushers & many other assholes! I dislike Arabs that do cut of heads because you are white or black or female or American or innocent workers trying to assist them or just because that's what they fucken do daily! They say WE all look alike! Myself white, my brother being African-American, a woman & many other look TOTALLY different, with different views & more. Even more ironic some are Muslims, & they are white, black, male, female & others! Point is depending on which ones, fuck em! Again it was the dream of a white, blonde, young girl, in a incest story, that's fictional & hell the list goes on. As for breaking it down to Klan or Nazis or wtfe, hell at most the author is racist or maybe not? Maybe he served, maybe he's ignorant. Can we say it's just a fucking story! Pretty hot story! Dad need a little more internal struggle & a couple little more things. The rape, if she becomes a doctor, she's highly educated. When pretending to be younger she just stated a group off ppl. Hell if it was racist then he'd jump to African-American ppl like most racist assholes do!

It was great and only my own preferences kept me from giving it a 5. I wish it had included at least one anal act.

I only wish I was married to such a women, a daughter, a love like this. In my early years I did not want children, now I love watching other parents enjoying theirs. Life means changes but true love never goes away, it just becomes a warm memory. Here, with the love between a father and his daughter it last forever.

Amazing story erotic sexual buildup, had me horny n hard all way through !

I liked the story but you don't know anything about medical school.

Was alright except for the Arab remark and the kids at the end.

The Arab remark was highly unnecessary and seemed kinda racist

the thing about arab men. fuck you. that was so racist and unnecessary. ruined the whole story.

is this what you guys thinks of arabs ??

that was the racist shit I've ever heard!!

I dearly loved it. 5 is not good enough for this hot yummy story. I give it a 10.

the Arab thing was the biggest turn off ever. check your blatant racism, loser.

The arab comment was disgusting

fuck you for the arab shit. you're disgusting.

What is up with the white supremacy sh*t? I'm not even an Arab, but what's with the idolization of whiteness and blonde or how others are jealous? Totally can't continue.

Great story, I hate Islamists also.

Would get at least 4* for the writing, which flows well and with plenty of my favourite ;

But the racist stuff is vile and pathetic, and although it's in the mouth of the character, not the writer, it's not challenged or presented as a bad side of their personality. So no. It's not getting a 5 or even a 4

so blatantly racist. disgusting.

gross racist btch

I can see this really happening. If people don’t think dads sees their daughters like that are nuts. Not all can do it but they do dream about it.

Beautiful, if not for the racist part, unnesisary for a "nightmare" to be detailed at all, let alone spacific in its racism. I realize the time period this was written in highlighted certain social issues but there still wasn't a need for it. A real dr would have latched onto her obvious trauma and tried to find out what had happened to his daughter. The lack of concern is ... Concerning. Otherwise, a well written love story 5* -1* for the blatant faux pas.

This is a nice story. I like that you didn't end it with the trip to Paris, UT talked about your marriage, and children.

Got to love the way the "anonymous people" love spewing "racist". It's the girls nightmare you daft muppets. Nightmares do not tend to be rational and there are literally thousands of girls out there that have been gang raped, including many by "Arabs". Nightmares tend to be what the mind thinks is the worst. If you cannot wrap your head around that aspect, then I would suggest you might want to learn more about what people fear, how nightmares work and why people fear that which is different.

I thought personally the need to go into so much detail around the nightmare was unnecessary, however that is the author's choice, if you don't like it, don't read it.

It was a little to slow for me, For a sexual read it was long laid out. I know most readers want to get right to it, I don't mind a good read. some times there was a few more words than needed be but over all i got an erection.

The racism killed it for me. I've had nightmares of being raped and lives through rape, I didn't obsesse over the guy's race and ethnicity. Totally unrealistic and unrelatable for me. Ruined my lady boner to the point that I can't power through it. Thanks for killing the mood. Please put racist content warning.

Good story except for the racist dream

3rdchnc

Liked the story, except for the racist rape in the beginning.

Would have been better if she was and her friends were leaving a club, were being attacked, and were saved by her daddy, who was there to pick them up.

Great story

Great writing, great read, really held my interest. Voted five sttars

Racism and entitlement at the very beginning ruined it

Loved the happy ending..... 5*

I love it it,s just a sweet love story between two adults.nothing is wrong sex is primal and raw energy so i love the connection of them .keep writing plz i love this kind of story .and yes they got married too which is important.wating for more story .

I have not seen a father and doughter i saw a man and women who just love raw and natural fullfill their desire perfect.

Beautiful story 5+ i love the bond between them but not receict begining

very sweet!...

Have you considered not having ugly racism in your story?

Unlike the liberals, I liked the smelly arab racism, that is exactly what they do to women in their countries, Europe and Scandinavia, fits her nightmares well !

The racism ruined it

I stopped reading because of the racism and the shaming of uncircumcised men

It's funny seeing all the comments on a story that is 16 years old complaining about racism. Check the dates on the story and what the news was during that time period people!

Loved it! I saw reality in what others called racism. Truth is truth.

I think the story was sensational. I became very excited and close to the two characters in the story. Remember it is all a fantasy?????

The story is good 💔😙

Too much knacking. 😚😂

Was well done and not perverse, a nice clean love story.

I stopped reading when I realized that the writer really doesn't like Arabs.

Great Story! Fantasy or Wishful thinking we need not know. Awesome!

My 3rd reading. It gets better

i cant with the racism in the 1st chapter this female protag is so cringey i,,

I have read almost every story you have written. I like your wring style, to the point and compact, not betting around the bush, not like other writers who dwell to much in description!!!

I truly loved this. Especially the part where they shared each others juices. Too many are afraid to write about men who don't mind tasting or sharing cum.

What the hell, antisemitism out of nowhere. Yikes, it's 2022!

Pretty decent story, but the racist "nightmare" and xenophobia in the beginning were totally unnecessary, and detracted from the story. For an author who is supposedly so experienced and prolific, it is very amateurish and juvenile. I hope it isn't something endemic to your writing. If it is, I doubt I will read much more .

Thanks 😊 for a wonderful story I do so in joy your writing.

Will not read any more comments you people are really sick. ENJOY THE STORY FOR GODS SAKE.

Dialogue is stupid. And by the way, medical schools don’t have freshman classes.

well written and all that,,loved it, very erotic love scene..

Excellent story in my view with good character development and enough erotics. I enjoyed it very much.

5*

BJ

Outstanding im so very happy for you 2

Looks like you hit a neve with the dream I guess alot of people of that faith like incest

It's exactly as it works in the real world.

I totally loved and lusted this story!

I thoroughly enjoyed the journey...look forward to their teen years

5 Stars..!!

I loved it and witnessed it with a 5-star rating..!!

JIM

Just awesome. I loved it.