All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

I truly loved the story and wish it had of been me, I have had sex with one daughter of mine and a step daughter also, I only regret that I did not stay with them. It was the best sex I ever had, this story brought back many good memoiers, thank you so much

Hmmm, very exciting. Had my juices flowing. I wish my daddy had been like that.

I loved your story. The people that are saying your store isn't very good need to sit back and think about one thing. Can I write a story as good as this one. Being a cridic as they seem to want to be means, THEY CAN'T do better. Keep up the good work. Your doing just fine.

i like the story. well written and erotic.

im one of those readers who also read comments from other readers. sometimes those comments are as entertaining as the story itself. for those who thinks that the author is racist because of the made up nightmare of the young daughter, think about the category you're reading. at least the story doesnt have BDSM in it and its all consensual. dang, they even have kids and nobody seems to give a hoot about it. but the minor made up nightmare sequence of the story seems to rile some ppl. LOL

so i guess to some, incest is more acceptable than racism?

Whether real, or not, this story was hot!! The seduction, of the father, and the daughter, because dad wasn't as "innocent" as he lead her to believe, was so damned sensual..If true, I hope they live a happy and productive life together..If not true, well then I hope she has more inside her to tell..

Racist? there's only one group that yells "Racist". The rest of us are from different places and different skin colors but who cares. My ancestors and probably yours were picked on and made to live in poverty when they came to this country not by yelling "racist" and demanding everything. I got where I am because I worked and saved. No one helped me and I was not one to say I want or I'm entitled because I'm poor and you have to support me. Get a grip and stop whinning and get a job. The current CEO of Walmart first went to work for Walmart pushing baskets in the parking lot! Ya think he would've made it if he kept yelling "Racist" and you WILL help me? Ohhhhh, Pooor me! Get a grip !

As for the Racist part, excuse me, I missed it 'cause I wasn't looking for it.....You understand that?

My god! I don't have anything to say.

except, whoa! great story, a little disturbing, very sensual, a little weird. Incest? Hmmm!

Very arousing. It actually turned me on, although personally I've never thought of my dad in that way.

Uncircumcised Arabs? There is no such thing. Muslims and Jews are usually circumcised,some Christians too.

This was a truly wonderful story! I was blown away by your writing, you're very good! Keep up the good work!

I have to say that I really enjoyed the way you have written this story. Very well done!

Now most of the time I wrote the word "WOW" it is my initials, but this time it satbds for wonderful, outstandingly wonderful!!! Is this just from your imagination or ispsired by a true story? this was ruly aw3esome!!! Very enjoyable!! Keep up the great stories!!!

I liked it very much. It was one in a million. keep up the good work.

Please expand this sexy and romantic story! I mean, continue it.

One is a million...thanks!

The slow build-up is not consistent with drab ending. Your imagination ran out.

wow this was just a fantastic story, very well written. thank you for such a great story, i'll be sure to look up your next submissions.

Scouries:

You are a master!! What you do, you do well! It's always a pleasure to read what ever story that you've written. this one is no exception. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I like the slow build mayby a little to much detail in the ist bit didnt like the ending I like to live in the now i met my girl friend when she was in year 12 she turned 18 the month I met her her 21st was good all her friends I am 50 now she and I are great together I love your story i dont have a daughter but I may as well have i fantasize about what you write. I am interested in the taboo suject I cant quite imagine doing it in real life but I tried but i withdrew thats why we write stories isnt it?

This is a mediocre story by a mediocre writer who clearly wants to believe that voluminous feedback equals good writing. Sorry, sir. That isn't the case. This is an unimaginative story with an unoriginal theme. These are stereotypical, cardboard characters, and even the sex scenes are tired and overused. This author should, if he insists on littering the site with this drivel, enlist an editor. There are various grammatical and spelling errors: "Oh yes Daddy." There should be a comma between "yes" and "Daddy" there. "now longer was it just the innocent loving father-daughter relationship we'd lived for eighteen years." I assume you meant "NO longer"? Boring, common and trite.

I think this has to be one of the best father -daughter incest stories that I have ever read .You have written it so well and the story plot is just perfect . I`d love to have a daughter like that .Ivan

Loved it!!

That wuz great. Man, that shyt made me cum so much. I would have totally loved a different ending though. should be a book perhaps. :-)

Well-written. But in seeking suspense, you tend instead to tease -- that's my only criticism. Should you choose to elaborate on your theme, making the story a generational thing (a saga, as it were), don't bring in the children, please. You'll all wind up answering charges on Court-TV.

were stationed away from home im in the army in serbia, i read your story and had a longing to be home with my "wife"

she is only 8 years younger than me but i think of her as my little girl.

an awesome story. i found myself having visuals.

Great story and well written.

You actually got me hard! I love the concept of these relationships and you portrayed the struggle to overcome morals and taboos very well.

It might be interesting to get the father's own view point as well. Ie to read how he becomes aware of and deals with the infatuation of his daughter. It would be cool to see how he encourages his daughter and makes her think she is controlling the action but it is really he that is besotted with his daughter and figures out this ekaborate way to seduce her while she is convinced that she is seducing him. This way he ensures not been reported for rape.

Anyway, I did get turned on by your writing, especially the idea that she would go into his bed while he slept and made him cum on her when he did not know. That is really hot!

Thanks

Lacem8

Great story and well written.

i am a dad and have a step daughter we finaly got together when she finished high school and I am still with her we are so good together 48 goes into 17 very very nicely ( i was never good at maths) I have great sex everyday i never have the feeling she has grown out of being my (daughter) she is so young and sexy allways nubile and hasnt really turned into a full grown woman yet I want her as my young flesh that I take every night and I am allways fantasizing about her , there is something of a real turn on with taboo sex and the smaller the woman the more the turn on as if she is too young, I can't explain it any more your story is it I have the sexual desire every time with her she is allways innocent and loves me the older man taking her and its a little repressed every time that is the secret ingrediant. Love your work read it again and again its got the key points, taking that ewhich is forbiden young flesh sweet and soft innocent and in awe of you. well done.

This was the best story I ever read on the topic of Father Daughter relationship. Keep writing!!

I love romance. Even though it is incest, it is still beautiful. I am married with 5 children, 4 my owe, and one adopted. I've been molested by an uncle, got pregnant and had an abortion at 15. There was nothing beautiful about it....But your story is beautiful and if all incest were something that was beautiful, you wouldn't hear all the horror stories on the new.

omg wowzorzs keep on writeing stuff like that and ill keep on comenting and voteing on it very nice story to not many on here with an actual plot and still sound good

brilliant style of writing.so much heat with a good story line is hard to find.

keep writing.

Not much new that I can contribute here, other than the story was very nicely written with a good buildup, some wonderful flashing back in time stuff etc. Only complaint I have - silly one, not the "racist" stuff that sent some people off - my complaint is that one doesn't get accepted to medical school at the age of 18 - esp. Harvard Medical school... she may have been accepted to Harvard College as an undergraduate for 4 years and then applied at 22 to Harvard Med for 3 more years....

My only complaint... great story.. thanks

What a great fantasy!! Your writing is top notch, the way you captivate the reader with the struggle of the taboo of incest and the beauty of a young woman with an older, experienced man (even if he is her father)is a delight to this old man. Keep up the good work.

A fantasy can be an enjoyable thing, and your little story gave it life that extended beyond the time that I sat here before the screen while reading it. The excitment you created did extend beyond the norm as I was able to take your well choosen words with me as I showered. Needless to say I/we,you and I had a wonderful mental time together...Thank you, with love

jak

You succeeded in writing a story about LOVE between father and daughter involving sex. Most stories are more or less just about lust. CHAPEAU!

I did not care for the racist comments - just can't understand the need to talk about arabs and the blond christian people. Disappointing cheap shot and you have produced much better.

Good build-up that didn't let you down at the end. That got me super hot! I like it from the daughters POV but would've also liked it told from the father's.

I loved it . One of the best stories i have ever read on lit :) Good job

wow that was amazing i mostly read lezzy but wow that was the best incest story i've ever read!

Well done. This held my interest and the writing was superb. Too often grammar errors and mispuncuation clutter up what would otherwise be a good story--you overcame that problem. I'm not so sure that the comments about Arabs were necessary. I wouldn't deign to make character judgements about you, I just don't believe politics need to be inserted. They could've been scary animal/monster rapists and the effect would've been equal if not superior. Still, a solid story. I enjoyed it.

This story moved me differently than most father-daughter incest tales. It's extremely well-written, not graphic or crude, and just plain got me into it, and feeling the emotions along with the players.

Like many stories, i wish there were more descriptions

of of the female's. I happen to prefer 95 lb. 5.0 women/girls.

Very Hot

One of the very best stories I have read on this site.

Great job, every part was interesting. Loved it, love all of your writing.

a great love story!!

you and anne240 are the best writers on this site keep up the good work

I loved the story. The fact it wasn't the typical "oh daddy, oh baby" with tons of misspellings was great. Write more!

you suck big time , first of all your part about the night mare with the arabs is so fucking far fitched than reality, if you know any thing about calutures the arabs and jews are the ones circumsized asswipe, and they clean thier asses after going to the bathroom un like you stinking ass using toilet paper. u suck dude.

First, this was a story that I could put myself into and believe. Too many stories of this nature are hard to believe, while yours is more than realistic. Second, I must agree with others that state too many stories are filled with gramatical or spelling errors that detract from the story. It is very well written, and is easy to read...essential for keeping the reader going. Well done and keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work.

my wife and i play this game often - of conflicted father and ineffably beautiful daughter, the wordless dance of seduction, guilt and rapture . . . it is always she who seduces me in our fantasies and i suppose that it must be that way in order to maintain some semblance (sp?) of righteousness - ya? whats a man to do? If he were to initialize some sort of sexuality he would be old and dirty and perverse and lecherous and yes ... however if he were to finally succumb to the persistant and unbearably provocative rituals of titilation from her - how could anyone ever judge him too harshly? The fantasy can only run in this one direction for me to be stimulated ... the other scenario is not rapture - just rape. good writing scouries- i came beautifully - i felt such an intimate bond with our young bursting heroine(though the cliched dream description was a touch weak - stay true to the imagination my friend)and i will look for more of your stories ... the psychology of what it is that excites me, excites me very much, you?

You did a great job with the story, especially leading up to consummation (this was my foreplay). I felt myself growing harder and wanting to cum throughout the story. When they finally had sex, I stroked my member to orgasm as the dad violently pumped his hard cock into his daughter's soft, pink, wet pussy. His years of secretly wanting her all bubbled to the surface at this point. Being used to jacking off to photos, this was a great experience for me. I came about 6 hours ago and still feel the afterglow. Thanks!

Using the words: God and Jesus are a turn-off. Try Gosh and Jezzzeahhhh.

This is the most believable and romantic Daddy - Daughter incest story I have ever read. great write More.

Not only was this story hot, erotic, and made me cum 4 or 5 times, but it was also sweet, loving and romantic. The best of both worlds.

This is one of the best stories I've read so far. I loved the back story and the end but most importantly everything in between. Just reading it I could feel what they felt too. If only every story could be like this. And I loved even more they were from Pixburgh!

Very enjoyable. Coincidentally, my own daughter is named Stephanie, so it was more than personal to me.

Keep up the good work.

well written and I suppose not over the top - could be quite realistic enough - which made it so good.

The whole build and structure of the story was like the sex it wrote about, starting with foreplay and finally ending with a mind blowing orgasm, if only every story was like this 1, wel done my freind, keep up the good work

One of the best storied i have read. It has eroticsm love and contintment. More please.

I can't quite explain why I enjoy father/daughter incest so much. I can honestly say that in real life, I have never been the slightest bit attracted to anyone in my family. I am a young female and I usually date men my own age but the fantasy of being taken by an older father figure (not my own father) is the biggest turn on that I have. Especially being dominated by two older men. Regardless, despite being incredibly liberal politically, the "racist" comments didn't bother me for the same reason that the incest doesn't bother me...it's fiction. The beauty of fantasy is that it is just that: fantasy. This story was probably the best erotica I have ever read because of the teasing and lucid descriptiveness. Kudos.

Lizzy

What a waste! Your story was lovely but your apparent racism, even if it was a ploy for a character to bed another, was shameless, unadulterated trash - pretty much the only way to ruin that story. Have some more tact next time.

we think your story was very hott my dad and i are lovers and have been for a number of yrs. we just finished your story and truly enjoyed it... hope to see and read more from you

There is no racism in it. She had a bad dream... she was afraid of being raped. Maybe she was thinking about 9/11. IF HE HAD USED WHITE, BLACK, ASIAN, OR INDIAN YOU WOULD STILL BE SAYING THE SAME THING. My point.... no better yet, my question is can you say any word that has to do about any race and not be called racist today?? God... AND EVEN IF HE WAS RACIST...... WHO F***ING CARES.... ITS HIS LIFE!!!! IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ IT! IS IT THAT HARD???

I usually like the shorter, "to-the-point" stories but I couldn't stop reading this intense tale. I felt like I was right there with my throbbing cock in my hand, pleading for Dad to hammer his smoking hot daughter. Juat an amazing story!! One of the best ones I've EVER read....ANYWHERE!

great love story, good detail, and very horny. thanks

the characters are very real.. and the story is very realistic.. i truly enjoyed it!!!

Father fucking his daughter, yet the Arabs are the bad guys. Then you go shoot up some poor girls and only fail to rape them coz the cops come around too soon. Yeah, but them smelly arabs are the bad ones.

Knowing some of your work, I give you the benefit of the doubt, that you were trying to show how your fellow white caucasians talk and think. All the same, if you just leave it floating in the air unchallenged, it sounds like you stand behind it. And before you know, Mr Scouries, the KKK and all the undercover and habitual racists are claiming you into their ranks and using your story as a platform to spew their filth.

Well written story, but my question is, "Is a white cracka fucking his daughter a better person than some arabs that rape her in her dreams?"

My answer, "No. The white cracka is was and will always be fucked up, for fucking his daughter and a whole bunch of other stuff."

In fact, the Arabs ought to fuck the white father in the ass for fucking his daughter. But if she is a slutty ho that creeps into her dad's bed naked, they ought to make her clean their cocks and get them hard again whilst she is at it.

Just giving you a taste of your own medicine, OFAY. And I'm not an Arab.

Plus anyway, think of all the black, vietnamese, american indians and all other races that were raped by a white cracker. Have you ever wondered why so many black americans are much lighter than the average African. There you have it, it was the white crackaz done raped them. For 4 hundrd years. Damn! Now I am having nightmares. Guess I need to go into my moms bed and whisper , "MUMMY!!!"

Just stop being a racist and keep up the good work. YOu are too talented to make such careless mistakes, unless it is your true colours you are actually showing. In that case, just keep on being redneck white cracker honky.

This is probably the best story of this type I have ever read!! Excellent work!

I loved your story although you might have gone a little bit too far with the whole arab raping her thing. Why was it them and not , oh i don't know, the irish? Arabs don't hate Americans becuase they are blond and good looking. THe entire eastern nations hate us because we are very arrogant. It might have been a little much. Besides, what 18 year old goes to their daddy when they have a bad dream? I didn't do that when I was a kid let alone now. And the way he just swallowed it. That was a little over the top. This is the only complaint that I really have. Otherwise the story was beautiful and I love your writing style. Maybe do a third person omniscient story instead of a first person once in a while. Keep it up though.

...that this story would turn out better then the other two of yours that I've read. Unfortunately, the nightmare about "dirty Arabs" immediately put a bad taste in my mouth. Also, nobody goes to any med school (much less Harvard) without going to undergrad first. Did you know that? I guess I'll have to chalk it up to your ignorance. Better luck with the next story. I won't be sticking around for any more.

How hot!!! I loved the whole thing good goin!

more you need to do more of these

I loved the climax and felt drawn in even thogh the (daddys) were a bit distracting. keep up the good writing and try not to anticipate the reviews they will come as they should. Shalom Jim.

Liked the story even though it took some time before daddy fucked her. But in the end it turned out alright. Please write more stories like this. Maybe with a little more sex involved.

Thanks.

Mike NZ

Really loved the story. In particular, that Steff had to wait so long and work so hard to get her Daddy to fuck her. That built up the tension and made the story more realistic than if her father had had no scruples to overcome. Lovely story, keep up the good work. I'll try reading some of your others.

I didn't feel like the "dirty arab" rape scene was racist. You could have picked any group, blacks, homeless, clowns, and the point would have been the same. It was a hot rape interlude before the real taboo. I think about angry black youths in gangs, which does not mean that I think all black men are in gangs and want to rape white women, and if I say they're stinky, it's just to add more perversion to the fantasy. If I say they all hate white people for keepin' a brotha down, it's to communicate the tone of the rape. We're talking about incest here. ARE there boundries? Who sets them? I say keep up the good work!

The story was very enjoyable. However, It would have been better if Steff had been a virgin and daddy had ventured her in all things sexual--Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

good story, but the ending made it. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

It's a shame you have to deal with the younger, sensitive, flat out ignorant people who post on racism and all that. Good story.

Great premise,is it going to continue or maybe another story along the same line and topic

wow ... I really liked that. I for one thought the ending was a little corney which is why I only gave this story a 4 but either way its really good. Wish I had a dad like that growing up. Ah but somethings are better left dreams. keep it up!

THIS IS THE BEST FATHER & DAUGHTER STORY I EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE.

MY BEST WISHES TO U THE GREAT AUTHOR.

I voted for 5, if I could have, I would have given it a 10, it's the second story I read, posted by you, but it sertainly will not be the last:) Keep on the good work. Your admirer in Iceland

This is definately the best father / daughter story i have read in a long time! Well done to you! Can't wait for the next..

I absolutely loved the story...great work and keep it up...I'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions

This is a superb love story, with very hot sex! I love every word of it, and still trembling inside at how close to home this story hits.

Thanks!

Great story, but keep your math straight.

Many Thanks for taking the time to put fingers to keys. An excellent tale.

this was a grreat story! i loved it!

This is one of the hottest stories ever. The warmth, the love and the passion in this story is beautiful, yet smoking hot. Please more,more,more................

It has happened to me. I hadn't the wealth or opportunities to move or keep it quiet. We parted when she was 27 and I was 48. We still share our love.

I wish my daughter an i had a relationship as good as your's , all dad's an daughter should keep the love of the family together.

Ray

Great piece of work. Telegraphed the ending a bit, but so what; getting there was worth the read. Look forward to more of your work. Keep the faith, bro.

thank you so much as I had it in much the same way but I didnt have to work as hard as she did to get him. I had made up my mind.

That Was totally AWSOME. Keep up the great work.

It was very good. I loved the reluctance and the bit of history you threw in. Most stories these days are only full of sex, but I must admit I get much more aroused when I know the full story.

Keep up the Awesome work!

hot story great imagery. story was made bettr by your knowledge of geography.aand it had a HAPPY ending. good job