All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

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Greetings from India... Hope you can go further because they gave birth to three daughters..

The story of incest you told was spun beautifully. But I agree with another commenter that it did come off very racist and xenophobic in the beginning. That was very unnecessary and almost ruined the flow of images that made this story appealing to me because I had to stop reading to calm my anger. I'd love to read more of your work on incest but with a lot less needless ignorance and sterotyping, even if the characters who convey it are fictional it reflects on the author.

wow.. It was AMAZING! I could really see myself in the girl's place.. next to my boyfriend. I felt as though I could relate.. My boyfriend and I are 7 years apart. The story brought tears to my eyes as I told my boyfriend how much I loved him on the phone.. It wasn't just about sex.. but love, between a father and a daughter. That's what I liked most about it.

I've read some crap in my day, and even written some of my own. Good sir you are ot apart of the crap category. This tale was stunning, well woven, well put together, and didn't rush into the sex like other stuff I've read. Please continue writing at this calibar.

I loved this story. A few more erotic scenes would have been nice. String us along a little but it was wonderful!

breath taking is all i can say

Truly excellent work. I'd even call this true literature. I've read a few stories here, and not a one came even close to weaving a tale of forbidden, relished sexual power. Right before the third page began, I couldn't take it anymore; my tension had built too high. I came so hard I thought I'd convulsed. Well, very well done.

While the story was very well written, the sexual tension between the two drawing i think every reader to the final page i was almost about to close the page because of the racist and totally unneccesary comments near the begining, once you can remove that from your writing you will have absolute litirical masterpieces in your hands, I am personally from Australia and do not appreciate American "Superiority" one little bit, great story, im 20 and my 19 year old girlfriend and i have had many similar nights of passion, thank you for a great read.

it made me cum

Loved the sexual tension and the discription of how Daddy got his girl. Always fun when daddy has a constant erection and is willing to let his maiden have her way with him,More,More, more@

l thought it was great and to see how true love never dies no matter what

Please keep up the geat writing

Most exotic story...

I thought the story was amazing. The first time I had read an incest story and it turned me on so much. Thank you for writing it. It got me really turned on. Well done :D xx

Absolutely amazing story. I have been searching the stories here for one like yours but none of them were anywhere near as hot as yours

the details are luscious and the story itself is enthralling--- wonderful work

very well written. i'm especially glad that they didn't just 'get it on', but waited, the tension building and building as the story continued. well done, i say. and continue writing.

Aside from the arab comment, this was one of the hottest stories here. great work

got my pussy wet.. i want moreeeee

This was truly a surprise for me. Usually when I read incest stories their rather bland and it's all about the fucking. But you pace the story very well. And make the audience squirm wanting to get to the naughty bits. Though the wait was well WORTH it. Not to mention the sex scenes were very well written indeed. It's like a pro-longed orgasm. Usually fantastic and great, but when held off for a period it's explosive enough to shoot you to the stars.

I loved it.

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Great story, excellent detail, having her have three kids as a result of her fucking her dad made it even better. Well done.

Nice, hot, juicy story...except for the racist Arab comment.

WOW very hot story, lucky Daddy

Nearly came myself uuuuummmmmmm

well but end shd have stopped after med college and marry a classmate, and daddy with another young femme.

omg it has to be one of the top 3 best stories i have read on lit i loved how there is a story and not just sex

m masturbating.....

WAIT TILL YA SEE DEATH

Okay, let's see ... lack of knowledge about grammar, punctuation, and even how to use elipses. The story itself was contrite and typical, what most incest readers would expect. A golden fairytale with a happy ending, although you thankfully didn't include the birth defects the three daughters would suffer from.

Do better, scouries, or sarahhhh, or whatever you might call yourself these days. I expect more, and you just don't deliver. Give me something I can really get into, and get off to, and I might put you on my faves list.

Or you could keep going the way you are and I'll just lump you in mith the kittenses.

This is the best I've read so far. Excellent!!!!!

Great story. Have no idea why peolpe will not vote - for you or anyone else. I will read the rest of your stories.

Well written, hot, sexy.

I liked it,very good story,and while I'm more into fantasy stories,note that I'll be looking at you'res from now on as well. You're a very good writer,and I look forward to more of you're stories.

Loved it.. Keep it up

i always enjoy your writing, and this story is no exception. Keep up the good work... Loved it.

I AM that 'Daddys Girl' and was right there with you and her the whole story. Was excellent. Hope you have more!!

I rubbed myself so fuckin hard in this story. ty for fuckin explosive orgasm.

love the story, it's so hot

this was awesome.. the best on i've ever read.

a great and wonderful story of a very lucky father and daughter!. Daddy and I share such a love starting much younger than the girl in your story. I gave Daddy my anal cherrie at eight and my pussy cherrie at ten. We fuck every day and have a set of twin girls both of which share our bed and they let their daddy take their cherries at the same ages as their mother gave him hers. It is so wonderful to help them as their daddy fucks them in the ass as well as their tight little pussies. I am forty now and they are nineteen and just love to eat pussy as they fuck us. Thank you for a great story!!

Disgusted by the previous commentor! Eew!

IT is a good story one that I would like to see come true for me.if it is any way to judge the storie I came 2 time before if was over. Keep up the good work. Bill

I thought that the story was great. Not only did you provide a great tale of sex between father and daughter but you included an intresting setting and prelude as well. Without those the story wouldn't have been as good, I delighted in the build-up!

hey dont stop writing these i love them i read this story 12 times already i love its great!!

plz plz plz write more!!!!!!!!

I LOVED THIS STORY. I STROKED MY PUSSY AND WISH I HAD A DAD TO FUCK. I HAD AN ORGASM JUST READIN IT.

You are really talent I loved it I have read it alot and think it is ace, From London England

THIS STORY IS INCREDIBLY EROTIC ... MY FAVORITE PART IS AT THE BEGINNING WHEN SHE IS LYING IN BED WITH HER FATHER WHILE HE SLEEPS.

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL TO THIS STORY . MAYBE ABOUT ONE SPECIAL NIGHT IN EUROPE.

I have read my fair share of incest stories, since I started revisiting this site. I loved the story! As it had a good amount of plot to it, the way the characters interacted with each other, the vivid descriptions of the events that took place. I like stories like this one, where there is an equal amount of sex and plot. I have to say that I am very impressed with this author's writing ability! I am working on a story of my own, and can only HOPE to attain this level of ability! If this author is still writing, I have only one request: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. To the person who left the anonymous comment entitled 'Wonderful Worderful', I would like to say that I am happy for you, that you have stood for what you believed in and felt what, in your heart, was comfortable for you. Though I don't know that I could ever do something like that with my own daughter, I have fantasized about it a few times! I'm happy for you!

that was rathr good ty

I could hardly contain myself! It was that well-written!

Loved the slow build up - very horny

With exception to the racist slurs in the early parts, was by far the best incest story i've stumbled accross online. Thank you for not writing drivel like "Zomg i think mom is hot so we fucked whil i jeked off myself on her hug titz". You see too much of that on these sights. A real writer you are.

Im new to this site and have read just a couple of stories here. But your story by far was the BEST! keep writing... Blessings Be Upon You...

I loved this story. Its so nice to read a story that is well thought out and planned, its enticing and has flow to it, its not like alot of these stories where its like i saw, i fucked, i came. You are a very talented writer indeed. Please keep up the good work.

wow i mean it makes one think and right now im calling up my girl so we can read it together

Dear Scouries, I have read I think most if not all of your stories. I think this is by far your best, and I thank you for it. The story itself is excellent; the storyline is complete - it doesn't just end at the first bonk but actually has a conclusion, and there are very few errors, so you obviously proof your work before submitting it. May I just say, you write 'she pled' ... she didn't. In English, American or otherwise, 'she pleaded'. The other is 'there', as in 'there going away'. "There" in this case is an abbreviation of 'they are', which written sounds and feels much better. Just my two-pennyworth! But again, thanks. Regards, Michael

Dear Scouries, I have read I think most if not all of your stories. I think this is by far your best, and I thank you for it. The story itself is excellent; the storyline is complete - it doesn't just end at the first bonk but actually has a conclusion, and there are very few errors, so you obviously proof your work before submitting it. May I just say, you write 'she pled' ... she didn't. In English, American or otherwise, 'she pleaded'. The other is 'there', as in 'there going away'. "There" in this case is an abbreviation of 'they are', which written sounds and feels much better. Just my two-pennyworth! But again, thanks. Regards, Michael

Your story is so convincing. I have 2 beautiful "daughters" and they are 16 and just 15. I am fighting the desire that I feel for them but it is only a matter of time before I succumb. The complication is that i have a beautiful young wife as well and I love them all.

Your stories turn me on SO much. It's incredible. You're totally the best writter on this site. They're SO sexy. I love it when you tell it from the kids POV. Like in this and the one about the Soldier Boy and him mom. I'm a younger adult and WOW it's stellar. Please right more of that type of story. pretty please???

So much love and beauty in this story . True and Real. Loved it .

Absolutly wonderful . You are a genuine Writer.

a little more tasteful and less anticipation... try not to indulge your delusions. keep the pace steady and unabided by ridiculous overtures (she's naked in front of him and wants him to fuck her now and he waits til Paris...get real!). don't infatuate your ego this was a trial run ...run amuck.

Your all the stories not only arouses me but becomes a lifetime pleasure you procede so gentally while other writers prefers mindlessly paced harsh & rude stories but still i would rank this story of yours 2nd as the story i liked most was "momma.. I groaned..."-that too submitted by you

Your story was so realistic...I could feel the undying love between the two....great story please continue to write

i liked the actual plot of the story and it was well-written and delicious in parts but i have to comment on your revolting language about the 'arabs'. i, too, am blond and american but it gives me no right to make judgements on any other person based on their race. it disgusted me, i think you should openly apologise.

I thought the story was excellent, and very well written! I think the 4months leading up to June aren't really needed, but the ending culminated very well, and the epilogue definitely enhanced the story line! thanks x

Brilliantly written! The best erotica I've read!

I really enjoyed this story (minus the racisim, which seemed really out of place) until the end. They got married? And had two children? That's ridiculous. As doctors they should know that imbreeding is never a good idea.

The ending was such a let down since the rest of the story was so good. You should just remove the epiloge and leave the readers guessing.

I became so engrossed with the terminology that you used to described the events and actions we all love. Good sex..and primal nature. Loved it and will pass it along.

very climactic

WOW!

I like it but it's racist!!

This story is amazing. I got so into the context that it was more like a book with a happy ending. I loved it, it was adorable and extremely erotic.

A tremendous story and well written. It takes both and you did it not respective of idiotic comments about racism. The only problem such people have is a pseudo faithfulness to the Judeo-Christian Ethic to which they don't subscribe in fact only the shadow of it. This is a story and a beautiful one. It isn't a political critique and I'm sure it wasn't meant to be.

Damn.. You don't even know.. This story was.. THE BEST. I've never seen anything like it! 5 Stars!

the mnd need not lay passive but enjoy working out the whole sex scenery and all the little details incorperated therein

I liked it but I didn't appreciate the racist comments, it is actually the arabs that are circumcised as it is part of their religion to be so, to not be circumcised is terrible in that region, sorry I lived there for a few years and I would know *wink* and they aren't dirty in the cities only in the country just like in America

Your writing is technically good, which is always nice to find here. However, the dialogue in the first page was so out there and unrealistic I just couldn't suspend disbelief and I gave up. I realize this is fiction but I still like characters to behave in a reasonably believable fashion.

I was also turned off by the Arab comment. Maybe if you'd set it up so we knew this girl was ignorant, it wouldn't have jarred so much.

In the spirit of constructive criticism, you need an editor. If you do have an editor, you might consider getting a different one. The possessive of 'body' is 'body's'. You used the plural: 'bodies'. And there are other mistakes. I will have to agree with someone who posted that the dialogue is pretty unbelievable. There were lots of good things about the way that you wrote. Now, I thought the father's reactions to his daughter's advances were minimal. This was pretty disapointing.

To the people concerned about the Arabs, it was only a dream. You cannot control what you dream, therefore you should not say what should or should not have been in her dream. Even the "racist" comments. Perhaps Stephanie didn't know that in actuality, that they are cut. The beauty of it is that it doesn't matter! It's a dream!

When addressing someone, there should be a comma. For example: "Do you like my new dress, Daddy?"

"The only problem such people have is a pseudo faithfulness to the Judeo-Christian Ethic to which they don't subscribe in fact only the shadow of it." What a bucket of hot, breaded, 11 herb-and-spices crap. The defamation has nothing to do with a religion and everything to do with an ethnicity, debasing a group of people who, depending on what area of the world they live in, may or may not be religious at all. While I agree you could use an editor, I found your situation and characters hot and kinky, until you completely lost me with your racist comments. But hey, I guess if we're all gonna go hog wild sinning with incest we might as well be racist bigots, right? Because one just involves our own preferences but the other doesn't hurt anyone or perpetuate an unnecessary stereotype... no...

I'd concentrate on writing a substantial INCEST story and leave the racism to a blog no one will bother reading. You had a good thing going until then.

wow and double wow. Wot a fantastic orgasm i've just had !!!!!!!!!!x

Congradulations! Thats got to be one of the best written stories I've ever read on this website, emotionaly and in sex appeal, you get a double thumbs up!

There were probably some grammar/spelling errors as people have said, but they did not wreck the story for me at all...some of the grammar on Literotica is so terrible that I can't bear to read it, and it certainly wouldn't turn me on if I did.

I found the "racist" comments funny more than anything, it seemed to me that Stephanie obviously made up that nightmare on the spot and we all say ridiculous things when we lie sometimes...on the topic of racism, the way it ended with the incestuous couple living in the South was a tad too stereotypical for my liking, but it doesn't detract from the story a lot.

But nitpicking aside, it was a damn good story. Beautifully written, you have a fabulous imagination...I've never felt compelled to leave a comment on a submission before, so I hope you see it as a compliment. I'm only giving you 75 because it wasn't long enough, hehehe...

Keep up the good work, my dear.

very good story

I would recomend getting a editor to proof read your stories before submission because you have a lot of potential and the story is good as it is but there is room for improvement grammaticly speaking.

I've never really read sex stories before tonight, but this was amazing. Stephanie is actually my name so it made this story all the more amazing for me. Just wow. I loved it. You're an incredible writer.

probably the best story i have read in a very very long time, love it

God I loved it! made me soo hot. I wish my own father was still around. I have read this in the past and I keep comming back. Thank you!-bookietwo

i thought your story was fantastic! i have read it before and loved it then too. from the romance to the sex i just above all loved the story line. and it really doesnt matter if you need an editor or not most of us got the visual anyway...one of the better stories around here

Why oh why didn't you let her give her virginity to her dad?!!! I, a man, nearly cried when she threw away her most precious and irreplaceable gift that was meant for her husband. Their perfect and inspiring and continuing story (even with the incest - or perhaps their union was much more valuable to them because of the family tie) was really damaged by this flaw. Certainly her father was no virgin, but when her - then their - love was the center of their lives and this was understood by her, there was just no excuse for her having a tawdry fuck fest, more than once as you told us, with an old boyfriend.

HOTTER THAN HOT. I COULD NOT STOP READING!

good for the two of you.I just wich i had someone like you

very nice, super hot, amazing writing!!

5 stars!

Loved it

For being the self proclaimed "Literotica's #1 Author," you're giving the rest of us authors a bad rap. Get off your high horse and get an editor. Your ego will recover in due time. Typical and boring, went on too long, suspense didn't work out for you in this one. It wasn't the story that got all these people to bust a nut, it was the incest.

There was only one page of hot stuff. All the other stuff was boring..... I actually skipped 2-3 pages. I've seen better.

You worked "the device" to perfection. By "the device," I mean the sexual tension created when both persons desperately want sex, but one of them is trying to resist. When this device is deployed as well as you did in this story, the erotic effect is stupendous.

Better than all the other stories I have read