All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

Have to say love stories that are full and background which this is. I enjoyed getting to know both of them

Really a nice incest story of dad fucking daughter.Young girls

love to make sex with mature men.So young girls long to be

fucked by their dads.This story is really fantastic.

Ah, to be your father. Images that will rest in those special places of my imagination.

I must say I have written a story or two myself but I have never read a better story. I look forward to reading as many of your stories as I possibly can, you have a great writing style and I found this story to have had an alternate effect on me than what I started reading it for. Please write more.

This wasn't like the"wam bam thank you mam" I usually fine here, it was deep, beautifully written and sexy, and amazing. You, are an amazingly tallented author.

Great story, how about another chapter?

Make it as hot as this story. Plenty of sex with both screaming & moaning when they cum.

Your story was excellent.I felt like i was there.Keep up the great work....

ive never heard a story thats made me so horny. i want that with my daddy so bad, wish i could seduce him stephanie style. fuck the boring idiots that go on about racism and whether you got the education system down correct. sad. great detailed story, nice to see a progression in an story rather than rampant sex scenes from no where with little dialogue. hope to hear more frm u soon x

Clearly, you're the real thing. A writer. You truly wove a seductive web that was impossible to escape (not that I wanted to). Compelling. Obviously, there is a certain inevitability in stories here, we know we're going to reach a climactic destination eventually, but you make the journey just as exciting and riveting as the climax. Wonderful stuff. I will continue to seek out your stories.

this is top quality work and the story had much more depth and passion than many kee[ up the good work. no matter who it ends up being i hope to find that much passion(and lust) in my life. thank you,

derek

wow. that story was unbeleiveable. the build up was explosive. please make many more stories because they are truely genious. i absolutley loved it. it was full of realistic fantasies that almost anyone an relate to. keep up the good work!!!!!!

Thanx

This is a very nice story, the build up to the magical moment was short but intense and the discription of the love making as sweet and lusty.

Well done

Kargan

great story . . very nicely done . . . real life incest is not always someone forcing the other person . . it really can be based on honest real love . . .

Dear Stef,

Your stoy is a wonderful peice of creation by human mind and your narration undoubtedly puts you in the pinnacle.

Keep it up and best of luck for future.

Sibi

This story was AWESOME! I'm 19 years old and I am in a very happy, fulfilling relationship with my Daddy. This story captures it all. Hate to leave such a short comment but I have to go fuck my Daddy now. ;)

well done and not something slapped together "for a quick wank" as some might say. there's depth to the characters and a very believeable setting keep up the great work

I am 60 and have been having sex with my 19 year old granddaughter for a year now. Her 20th is comming up soon and we wish we could get married, but you know! All I can say, life is great, I hope to die making love to her. She sees no other men and I being widowed, we love for hours playing and loving. I am glad we can't have children. She promised to have one after I am gone and name it after me. I found my soul mate.

i'm obviously not the first person to think this but i LOVED this submission. this is a real story, not the poor grammar and dirty words of others i've read before. it is beautiful, sexy...a true masterpiece. you keep writing them, and i'll keep reading.

this story has got me thinking. i did wonder why my dad kept looking at me , you know that way. i didnt think anything of it but i do now. i do fancy him , so thanks to you i will and see if i can make him my first lover.

sharryn.

I have been reading this type of story on various sites for quite a while and have read both good bad and ridiculously bad ones, and have never either voted or written an appreciation, but this took me right in there and was so real and so well written that it took my breath away --- scouries you are a great author and I look forward to reading your previous and future work with great anticipation -- one word SUPERB.

If only that could have happened to me...all I get from my beautiful sexy daughter is glimpses down her blouse and when we part a tight hug while I take that as an excuse to rub her back to find out if she is wearing a bra or not.

The seduction of the father, who so obviously wanted her but wasn't going to risk hurting his girl, was matchless. More foreplay before he jumped into her tight little box would have been great; how could any Dad fail to eat such a sweet pussy first?

The Arab dream scene did have racist undertones, but mostly it felt gratuitous. Could have been left out, unless the author just wanted to give her a chance to talk to Dad about sexual encounters. But that could have been done using one of her classmated, especially one that's hot for him. And I think that would have been hotter and a better fit in the storyline.

That took a really weird racist tone.

Thanks for writing such a believable story

I can't remember ever reading anything that seemed so real and so sensual. I am 64 and I was transported back to my 30s, 40s, and 50s, and the two women I've love the most, and I nearly came in my pants while reading the last chapter of this MARVELOUS story. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with the rest of us. You could still turn me on when I'm 90!!! R

If only I had a baby girl like you. I felt like I was your daddy and could feel all that he was feeling when you two made love.

Thanks

Just thought your story was well written, loving. You didn't leave the reader hanging like many authors here. A true Love story, thank you

So, you have 228 comments on your "Daddy" story - 229 now. I started reading your work some years ago and I wrote at the time that it was brilliant. You craft a story so well, and as someone else has noted, you take the story to completion rather than get bored with it once the gravy strokes are done!

As many other readers of this story have also written here, the love between the two is palpable; the anguish of the father over the risk, social or emotional, of 'damaging' his daughter makes this such a super story, just of people ... the fact that it revolves around an incestuous basis is almost bye the bye.

I thank you very much. Best regards,

Fubar2k

Auckland, NZ

I dream about my daddy all the time but he doesnt even fuck my mother, let alone me.

My boyfriend is little substitute for dad!

this gave me the most explosive orgasm of all time, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!

great buildup to the inevitable event. a kind of foreplay for the reader. VERY WELL DONE! I will read more from you.

This is some SMOKIN writing! I fell in love with Daddy, and thought I was 18 again!!! I will read this one over and over again!!

That stupid racist shit about "Arabs" (read "Blacks") wanting to rape our lovely blonde women was completely unnecessary and a complete turnoff.

Sal

You did a masterful job on a taboo subject. Could change a lot of opinions on incest. Thank You

work of a master

this story so realistic. i just like to know, is this story your real life story ? well, i love the way ur wrighting..i feel so excited when i was reading this...i like to see your pics plz e-mail if its possible nagahiahans@hotmail.com

I just discovered your work through your Daddy story. It's been some long time since I've read anything so stirting. Your lengthy introduction leading upto the exposive climax, pardon the pun, is as much seduction as it is foreplay. Plesae tell me that talent such as yours has made it to written publication. Thank you for the marvelous story, and I will be looking for more of your work.

Well I must say that you are the daughter that i dreamed of, I have my own,but shes not interested.Any way, masterfully done! Masterfully done! You are an extremely erotic woman.Thank you.

scouries:

Very well written. Do the children know that their father is also their grandfather? ...That their mother is also their half-sister? I'm having a lot of fun with this one...

Now...as the three daughters become teenagers, will mommy let daddy have sex with them as well? What if they become as infatuated with daddy as their mother/half-sister? In any event, daddy comes out ahead! (npi - no pun intended...well maybe!)

The racism about Arabs was not only inappropriate and offensive, but only demonstrative of complete ignorance. Educate yourself before spreading vicious propaganda about other cultures.

Like all the arabs,far to sensitive to voice their comments.The story is a masterpiece of erotica....keep it up JIM

Being a doctor, i loved to fantasize with her every word on how it would be to be with one's daughter. Yum is all i can say. very hottt. delightful. Dr E

Has to be the best story of yours that I have read as of yet. Given the detail I wonder how much is fantasy and how much is reality.

It ticked all the boxes for me and my lady friend who is 37 and I am 58, we also started a long time ago, so we can relate to this story. Full marks 100%

It seems to me it's fabolous story. How you got out from law, public eyes and your own mother. If it's real nobody find out. It's illegal.

Do the children ever ask about their Grandparents??? I loved it, personally I'm not attracted to my family members but this story is Awesomeness

Very nice. That'll be something to keep and read for hours durning the night when my pussy is throbbing! ^.^;

That was...incredible.<br>

I haven't felt that pleased with anything in a very long time.<br>

I must just give you an appluase to your skills as a writer.<br>

That was just...insanely incredible.<br>

I'll never forget your story.

what can i say BUt wonderfull

This story was freaking hot! Almost had an orgasm with the daughter at the end just from reading it. If only there wasn't the Arab bit - I'm sure Arab daddies are just as hot!

I loved it, beginning to end there were no parts of the story I didn't like. I've had the site in my favs a long time and have rarely read a story that I enjoyed every part of. Bravo! Excellent.

exquisitely delicious. Loved every word of it! Definitely a pussy-tingler.

this reallly is one of the most disgusting things i've ever read in my life. i have not homophobic, racist, or anything. but what the fuck is wrong with you. honestly it was pretty well written. so spend your time writing about things that don't suck your dad's dick. fuuuuuck. and what was that racist shit?

loved it. lots better than mum son stories which i usually seek out.HAVING BEEN AND DONE THAT but a very long time ago thou ,i,m always envious does no one ever have a small one!!!!

hot story.

Oh, Jeez...

Hmmm... To begin with, some men can pull off writing from a woman's point of view. You're not one of them. I only read this story because I saw all of your self-advertisement on the forum. Well, there's forty minutes of my time I'll never get back.

Can you say editor? I thought not.

I have a hard time trying to believe the "woman" portrayed in this story is anything more than a thirteen-year old girl. Shouldn't it be banned from the site?

It's not a sexy story. It's just self-serving crap.

the story was great, so i dont see why that faggot with the comment below me has to piss and moan about it

fuck him

i liked it but when i put it as me insted of steff i was disturbed but good story

Absolutely loved your writing style. In fact, I almost lost it myself at the end. Take that as an ultimate compliment when you consider that I'm a 55 year old gay man who normally doesn't have heterosexual fantasies. Hope to see more stories ahead from you.

Great story ... the story of a girl becoming a woman, of a daughter becoming a wife & mother, of a father becoming a husband ... romance, sexy, and erotic fantasies all mixed together much like real life ... there is never just one story to be told and you did a wonderful job of telling all of them at the same time. Thank You for the opportunity to read it. Please don't stop writing you have a gift, please continue to share it with the world around you.

An Admire & Fan,

Michelle Jo

Loved the story. Got off twice before I finished reading it. Wish I had a daughter to break in.

I liked the story tremendously, except that the girl was way too manipulative. She seemed to have no hesitation on her own part. It definitely was not written by a woman with a woman's viepoint.

Once, when first written, read it again today, and felt the same way about the story both times "Great". Never been there, almost close with a grandfather, another story. But I love the storytelling and the almost trepidation on the fathers part,she knows pretty much what she wants, what at "18", and gets everything. Great story and a lovely dream. Fantasy fulfilled. Thanks D.

I really loved this story. It was just beautiful. You have a real gift and should explore it furthur if you haven't already. WELL DONE!!!!!

This is well written and HOTTTTTTTTT. I have these fantasies also but would never touch my own. I guess that's the difference in Reality and fantasy? I might get barred for this, but then again the results might be beyond my greatest expectation?

bonifiedredneck@yahoo.com

Was sexy until you got to all that Arab crap. I don't want politics in a sex story.

Excellent story! Certainly kept my scroll button on fire. I enjoyed how all the strings were tied at the end. Very fulfilling.

This story was amazingly good! It was beautiful and extremely well written. Not to mention HOT!!!! I'm as gay as a guy can be and I STILL got off to this story!

The story was awesome

HOT ROMANTIC SOULFUL EXOTIC EROTIC

VERY GOOD WORK!!!!

i almost came just reading it ,will u make more!?

I loved this story, but suggesting that father and daughter went on to have children together was really gross. We all know what can happen in those instances and that was an unfortunate addition in the ending...otherwise a really great read...and yes, many women can be that manipulative. I know I am.

A tantric story from start to finish. Well done.

cant wait a few more years to have similar experience with mine, she seems to want it now

I,m too young as well but crave for my dad and older brother, I've tried flirting with them and accidenly flashing but they dont seem to notice, what can a girl do?

I loved the story but the fact that an 18 year old girl was still saying "Daddy" every time she addressed her father slightly turned me off. Along with the racial expressions in the beginning...this story can only rate a 3 in my book.

I really enjoyed your story. I have never comed so hard from a story as I did with this one. It was well written and spaced wonderfuly. I will continue to read your stories. Thank you.

its the best thing in the world to beable to feel your daddy fucken u in every hole u have....soooooo hooot

hott...nice work...I would also recomend leaving out the addition of children (slight turn off)

yeah I agree. leave the kids out. good story tho. you might also want to make the dad more reluctant

Whats wrong with having Childern Most turn out okay that I know of

Ilove fucking my daddy. I love his thick cock and the feel of his balls gently slsppung against my ass. I love the way his sticky cum feels in my pussy. I like the way his tongue feels inside my pussy as he licks my cunt clean. I love the way he unfurls my labia abd sucks on them while pinching my clit between his calloused fingers.your stories remind me of the pleasurable fucks I enjoyed with my father

So beautiful, so sensual, so REAL. It actually moved ne to tears.... As one who has actually been there - it took me right back to my own earlier years....

Very good. I totally creamed my panties. It brings back memories of me with my brother when we still lived together.

The fact that she had a sexy father, was good. But I would never do that with my dad. That'd be awkward for me. [ R.I.P Dad ] But It was awesome. I loved it.

I would have really liked it, except for the overtly racist comments about Arabs, and how Americans are hated for how "attractive" and "blonde" they are. Sounds a little Nazi-esque.

i totally creamed my panties. i loved the detail and the way she seduced him soooo well. the fact that she waited was sooo sneaky but sexy @ the same time. i loved it.

Was what you've been bragging about? I'm sorry to say I had grown tired with the story midway through the first page and so I scanned it to find the sex, just so my batteries weren't wasted. Thank god for a vibe and Duracell, otherwise this would have been a waste of my time. I came, but not because of you and this so called wonderful story. *shudders* Go learn to write and when you do, come back and try again.

Maybe I'm just cranky but this wasn't a very good story. It was way too long - the information about the dates was confusing and I really didn't like the part about her bad dream - just a little racist.

that was a great story i wish i could wright one like that about me and my mom who is like you dad single and very very sexxy and i love with all my heart

Loved the seduction and honeymoon and joyfull ending.

Felt uneasy about the medical/doctor/career relationships; but Hey, this is Literotica fiction.

predictable, RACIST (wtf hitler youth? seriously, such a turn off), and the sex was moderately written at best.

First off, the character who used those racist comments was a young girl, who likely could give 2 cents of a crap for realism and-or not hurting people's feelings who heard it.. know why??? She was SPEAKING TO HER DAD IN A BEDROOM, not an auditorium... <p>

So it was realistic, on the premise of her dad asked her a question, and she didn't have a pre-planned response... get over it... 18 or younger year-olds likely don't think that far ahead in what they say... that, and it was a ploy that fit the storyline (and again, hello, 6am in the morning, had to make something up quick, and this story was submitted not long after 2001, so go figure what a teen would fine most horrifying)...<p>

So no... arab-bashing? Hardly...<p>

And apparently the people who complained about the story being too long, are the ones looking to have a story start right off with sex, and not "move towards it" as a story should (at least a good one, that's not PWP).. if you want flat out porn, with no build up, I'm sure there's plenty of "less than 1000 words" stories out there.. so get over it.<p>

Oh, and those who complain I posted anonymously? I don't remember my password right now, since I haven't been to this site in over 6 months... Still, I'll sign in with my alias anyway...<p>

<p><p>

Trager Maximoff<p>

(PS: I like paragraph seperations, so added the P-tags.. no clue if it will take though)

I liked the development of the story. It is fiction, and as such anything goes. Good writing and I would not refuse a beauty such as she.

comeon people just cause she was arrogant because of her looks and lifestyle doesnt mean shit and the stuff about the arabs... well if you knew the ones around sydney (that sheik for example who said "women dressing provocatively deserve to be raped") its pretty close to being spot on with alot of peoples attitudes anyway, i liked this story it was interesting, well written and seemed beleivable which is what makes a good story

Started out ok. but got way too long for a quick ending!

The "Race" thing was a turn off, no place for it here!

Please don't waste our time!

I agree with most other voters- the racist comments about Arabs did bother me; I found it distracting and unnecessary. However, I do see the reason for the quick lie at 6 am, but it could've been written better. A more clever lie, perhaps?

All in all, I thought it was a fair story. The development was good, I enjoyed the story and background and happy ending. The sex was a little weak and mildly anti-climactic though.

For the most part of this story I think the biggest issue was the first two pages of the long text. I can understand the reluctance of a father and too make it exceedingly good that the daughter needs to convince her father of her taboo. Still I believe that she could have teased her father (and the readers) a little more. All in all despite the complaints and the slight racism (which I don't really think about anyway) I liked the story quite a bit.

The storyline wasn't confusing, if you read fiction or novels at all you usually find a story has to begin it's tale and spin into the story slowly. That's what makes the story seem real and appear even more erotic. This author should write for Harlequin Romance or begin her own novel..it's the exact writing you find in a Jackie Collins or Danielle Steele. I think some people may not used to reading such 'good' material.

as well as other genres of writing, you are so so so wrong. If he tried to publish something like this mainstream, he'd be crucified. I don't know of an editor willing to take on someone who uses mutiple consenants to express emotions. If this is something you think of as publishable work, you need to get your nose out of Dick and Jane and try something else.

I somewhat enjoyed the story, but I feel it needs a bit of work. A lot of it feels slightly redundant and I found myself glazing over certain parts because they seemed repetitive.

There was a lot of build up to the story, but I didn't feel as though the "climax" as it were really hit the mark the writer seemed to be aiming for.

Definitely a good start, but it needs to be fleshed out a bit. At points literally lol j/k

Good job, nonetheless.