All Comments on 'Finally Ch. 01'

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qarlcueqarlcuealmost 14 years ago
So romantic and sexy!

Thanks for writing this. I could picture everything because you described it so vividly. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
excellent, but too brief

The first chapter in this romance story is well-written, but too brief in all aspects, from the introduction to the love scene which follows.

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