All Comments on 'First Time with Friends'

no heat no nuthin

Good story line, but needs some editing.

Instead of describing the characters all at once at the beginning of the story you could add a little description about each of them as the story progresses.

Enjoyed the read. Hope to see something else penned by you in the near future.

Call me old fashioned, but I just don't get the appeal of ejaculating on a partner's body, vs. inside her vagina. I'd only be doing that if my partner explicitly told me to not cum inside her. And that hasn't happened in many, many years.

The descriptions were very clinical, more reporting than telling a story or arousing.

Well done! It grew from work mates to play mates!

Not too long or boring..