All Comments on 'First Time with Friends'

Not too long or boring..

Well done! It grew from work mates to play mates!

The descriptions were very clinical, more reporting than telling a story or arousing.

Call me old fashioned, but I just don't get the appeal of ejaculating on a partner's body, vs. inside her vagina. I'd only be doing that if my partner explicitly told me to not cum inside her. And that hasn't happened in many, many years.

Enjoyed the read. Hope to see something else penned by you in the near future.

Instead of describing the characters all at once at the beginning of the story you could add a little description about each of them as the story progresses.

Good story line, but needs some editing.

no heat no nuthin