by Sabineteas
...but Marianne is my hero(ine)! Marianne has her employee at her will. Will there be more? I love those stories :)
Loving these stories, similar theme to what I am starting out on in real life with my neighbours and their friends. I hope the stories stay real as I work my way through them.
The 1st chapter seemed a bit rushed to me, maybe not leaving a well-balanced impression is a better way to say it. In contrast, 2nd is better, has an easy going pace, good mix between speech and descriptions.
Nice discovery ... thanks and I will continue reading.