All Comments on 'Foolishness & Humiliation Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
It may sound cruel...

...but Marianne is my hero(ine)! Marianne has her employee at her will. Will there be more? I love those stories :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Quite good!

Would love a revenge/turn the tables story as a followup.

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Hot hot hot...a must read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

It's getting hotter wow.

cryptic_cravingscryptic_cravingsalmost 5 years ago
Thank you

Loving these stories, similar theme to what I am starting out on in real life with my neighbours and their friends. I hope the stories stay real as I work my way through them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The 1st chapter seemed a bit rushed to me, maybe not leaving a well-balanced impression is a better way to say it. In contrast, 2nd is better, has an easy going pace, good mix between speech and descriptions.

Nice discovery ... thanks and I will continue reading.

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