by spikysex
The first four parts of this story were great. You started to cross the line in fifth chapter. In this sixth chapter I only read about 2/3's of the first page and stopped because it got more than a little out of hand. You went from controlling to being outrite cruel. How would you like someone to put a chastity belt on you and shove a dildo up your ass and leave it there for days at a time?
I guess I don´t agree with the previous comment, but again I am a true fan of total submission and sexual slavery. I really love the turn of events. I love the way Owner is transforming Marie into his well-trained pet. The timing is correct, little by little. Eventually, I would love to see the other three housemates following the same path into total servitude. A good addition after that, could be one of their mothers or the house owner so he could keep the house and transform the place into a pet training resort (and remember there are people with soooo many pets). Thanks for this wonderful story.
The beginning of Part 6 is LAME. You used Part 5 for the beginning of part 6 and that detracts from the story and shows laziness.
Thought this story up until chapter four was going to go the high road of the four girls sharing the Handyman sexually seperately and together as a fivesome. Even having them sharing their freinds with him as well.
Do not like it now that it has taking the low road of peeing and having dildos put in peoples asses for days on end. Not arousing at all.
You've taken what was a very special situation and story and turned into heartless trash without any sign of caring, erotism, or sexiness. At this point, I am no longer a fan or this series, so I hope the author with take readers feedback into consideration and step back onto the sensual path this story should have been on the entire time. Abuse is not sexy, its just abuse.
This storyline had the potential to be a very good one with one lucky guy having endless sex with four girls. Now it has no redeeming value whatsoever and it is too late to turn it back into the story it should have been all along. Sorry, but will not be reading anymore in the series.