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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
:)

I enjoyed this. It made me smile. I was expecting erotica, but you didn't need that here. You did well without it.

epiphany65epiphany65about 14 years ago
Great story

I gave it a 5. It reminded me of an account I once heard of a guy doing a ritual within a circle in his garage. The entities appeared, and one caused a phone on a counter outside the circle to ring. When the man reached out for the phone, he was vaporized... supposedly a true story... happened in Los Angeles.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
absolutely great !

this was hilarious with a deliciously twisted ending . . very well done

AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
Off beat, funny, well written- what more could you ask for. It sure filled my quota for entertainment.

Again, thank you for the chuckles, sir.

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