by HawkerDeHavilland
Please continue the story. Have someone help you with editing, for it is a tale worth telling.
However, I feel that it would have benefitted greatly from an objective proof-read. The action does not, IMHO, flow smoothly. Spelling and punctuation could be improved as could the geography. When using Welsh (not Gaelic) be sure to mutate correctly. Diolch yn fawr am eich ymdrech a parhewch i ysgrifennu :-) Look forward to the continuation.