All Comments on 'Julie's Mistake Ch. 12'

Love Love Love your series. I am an avid fan who always votes you high, and raves about your work. I guess the old guy just wasn't a turn on to me as a female reader....maybe it will be a nice fantasy for some older male reader! I can't buy Julie finding any satisfaction in this episode either, but then that's me. I really felt you did a great job showing progress in writing reluctance on her part initially...showing us a more resistant feamle. I also felt that the descriptions of both characters were excellent, and I think in many ways, you wrote a great portrayal of both physical and emotional characteristics of the leads, and gave plausibility to the old man's blackmail as well. More believability as far as motivation in your work than in many tales in this category.

I hope the dude died after the sex though...or maybe it was a bad dream on her part...OR he died after taking the 'blue pill' from the cardiac complications before he even experiences Julie! I guess I just can't see him surviving the plotting of the blackmail far less the sex! haha.

All I can say is bring back Roger and when when when will Julie suffer from her hubby being used by one of these men who are blackmailing her? Surely we will see them degrade her by having her poor husband screw her unknowingly for an audience...thinking he was with a whore....some scenario. Just bring back the more sexually believable men next chapter!

I do applaude your range of characters though!

Liked it. Gave it 5 but not as good as earlier chapters and like the other comment it did seem a bit off kilter but hey still a hot read.

Loved it, poor Julie

What a shame she deleted the photos

More please!!

Awesome story, but please don't tell me that's the last time the old guy gets to bang her! He's gotta have more dirt on her. I hope he's still got some Ammo because I love reading about a hot young chick blackmailed into becoming a sex slave to a dirty old man. Keep writting man, good job, great story!

i love the whole series, all the stories are very erotic and exciting from a womans standpoint, at least they are to me. the concept of being taken against your will but without violence is a real turn on. i love your attention to detail and believable plot lines. hope you write lots more and thank you for the sexy feelings. vanessalea - 29f

Keep it going this is great.... let Roger have her...let her have more adventures...

I think the old guy needs to have some work around the house and she is the compensation for his young help, while he enjoys watching her submit to a very young male.

I can't believe it! This woman is, like, a complete slut! She should be ashamed of herself. Someone ought to spank her good and make her cry. Julie, quit your job as a lawyer, stay at home and have babies, join the mormon church, and volunteer at the local elementary school.

Anonymous in the Kitchen,

Thanks for the comment. As you know, this is all in good fun, so reading one that has a sense of humor is great.

GrantLee

Horace needs to feature again!

A great story. Julie realises the truth. She is a whore. She is a whore..... also wondering as I read, if she and her husband might be trying to start a family. If so, with all of the cum from so many different men having been pumped into her, how will this whore ever be able to know who the father of her child is? What if it is the asian man who fucked her in NY? How will she explain that?

nice story and very interesting but depicting julie as a weak charector is not in good taste.

Why not just have Horace keep the pictures…? Even if his cock exploded from the blue pills and fucking Julie he would still be able to keep some control over her:

Nude sunbathing in the backyard and community pool for an hour a day in the afternoon when her neighbors would be home and notice.

Wearing the same bikini for washing their cars.

Gardening in her bikini

Having to ask neighborhood boys to rub her down with sun lotion

Walks or running around the neighborhood in either just her bikini or her tiny running shorts and bikini top

Just another boring story

Love throwing Horace in here! He’s just a random creepy old man who takes advantage of an opportunity.

Kinda wish he made more appearances or was busts were referenced more often.

Julie’s life is clearly spiraling out of control what better way to subtly underline the completeness of that fact than every few days she has to go back to his place, either for a few minutes or all night.

The guy is old, he has a large bottle of blue pills, and a young busty blonde neighbor completely under his control.

Given this circumstances it seems that Julie would find herself spending a lot of time either with him or underneath him.

Hehehehehe!!!!!! Bet she never imagined in law school that this is where she’d end up! Dang she got to regretting her life choices! Lololol

It’d be hilarious if Old man Horace had Julie move it with him. Every day working hard and catching cock at the office, every night sucking and fuking a cock old enough to be her grandfather’s hoping he don’t knock her up!!!!

Wow She had to dickstab herself on an old man! I wish he would have stolen her bikini

It’d have been much funnier if the only way Horace would’ve been able to barely maintain an erection is by Julie continually massaging his prostate. The moment she stops he starts drooping. Now our fav blonde lawyer has to keep her finger in his ass as she tries all she can make him come. Especially challenging when she tries to figure out how she can obey when he tells her to keep massaging him while he fucks her

Loved this chapter! Wish Horace would’ve had her visit a few more times. His character was more down to earth, he was funny and quirky. It was def enjoyable reading the feelings and reactions of both

Love Horace for a creepy old guy he is the man. Like how he took a viagra to help himself. It’d been funny if after time he cums his cock wouldn’t have went soft. That way for solid 4 hours he’s having fun making Julie ‘fuck & suck’ nonstop, on a iron cock that she can’t seem to fully satisfy enough to allow her some rest.

Dam too bad she refound her bikini! Horace should had just taken another little blue pill then chased her home. Neighborhood would luv show

Instead of being nice and letting Julie hide behind the privacy of her bikini the old man shoulda just told her to wear tennis shoes, a wide brimmed hat, and her sunglasses