All Comments on 'Laura's Vineyard'

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surveyor49surveyor49about 6 years ago
Lovely Romance

One of the Best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
BEST LOVE STORY IN LITEROTICA

This is, without doubt, the best love story in Literotica. I read it annually.

I grew up in northern Indiana very near to the location of this most beautiful love story.

My family were farmers, mostly corn, wheat and pigs but I remember the tomatoes, peaches and ,yes, grapes.

I still remember the black rich dirt sticking to my boots as a child.

Now I'm a professional (physician) but believe I made a mistake to not work the land my dad promised me if I followed him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Tear jerker...

That was such a touching story. I too shed a tear as I also just found out my ex-wife passed away.....it was a double tear jerker for me.

I felt like I was a part of the story as it was so well done.

Great job!!!

mikesfun2018mikesfun2018almost 6 years ago
Truly touching story. I loved it. --from a mid-40s man

Oh, wow! I've been reading Literotica for the past 14 years. Only now after reading "Laura's Vineyard" for the first time did I register for a Lit account. Like so many others that have read this beautiful story, ronde, I became choked up and tears were brought to my eyes. I loved the way this story touched not only my desire but even more my heart. And yes, I'm a mid-40s aged man. ronde, thank you! Truly...thank you. I look forward to exploring more of your work. Thank you again and I wish you all the best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very very moving

I started trying to read something that stimulate me in an erotic manner but ended up with tears in my eyes Best story I have read

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just fab

I read this a while ago - just as good today. An example of good writing indeed

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is a lovely story.

Better than that.

GentlemanMasterGentlemanMasterover 5 years ago
Simply beautiful

This is what erotic writing is all about. I'm very impressed. You are my new favorite author here on Literotica.

ChrissrChrissrabout 5 years ago
Great thought the years.

You have not posted a story in over a dozen years but you are still one of the best writers here.

Thank you for sharing your gift.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
The most beautiful love story

Thank you...….soooo much

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
votes

I wish I could give you a higher score this is better than the best

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent work.

What a great story. I was blinking back tears on the 3rd page. Truly beautiful writing. My contributions on here have received some good comments, and others that were angry and hurtful. So I know what it means to receive positive comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I can only give you a FIVE

Truly an EROTIC, STORY.

Everything I hope for when meandering through this site.

Thank you.

Windman1Windman1over 4 years ago
Nicely done!

Your talents made it easy to get lost in the story. Bravo!

G5902G5902over 4 years ago
A Special Story

I have enjoyed reading this sweet story again — Thank You for sharing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW !!!!!

One of the best on Literotica. Brought tears (of happiness) to my 86 year old eyes.

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 4 years ago
Wow

It was a great story.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
What A Great Story*****

Just a great piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Deserves 6 stars!

Absolutely the best short story I have read in a long time. Kudos and thanks to the author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent Story

A great story beautifully written and believable, this was so believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
beautifully real ...

This wonderful story is my benchmark, not just in erotica [which would have debased

it] but in very fine, general literature

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Outstanding Story & Writing.

This stands out among the others. Defo one of the best that I have read.

DazzyDDazzyDalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Basic values, hard work and honest emotions!

almac5588almac5588over 3 years ago

You are a master story telley

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
thank you

Over several years I hav eread this story multiple times and it brings tears to my eyes every time. thank you for a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not very good

Barley made it to page 2. Looked for the sex part, disappointing, very.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A beautiful story

You write very well. Ignore the comments that disparage the dream; that BOY isn't old enough to understand. Loved it. Glenn

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusabout 3 years ago
Beautiful Story

Thanks for Sharing!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Well done

I have read this story twice, and enjoyed.it.even more the second time!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Brilliant story

Brilliant story, Absolutely loved it. A poignant tale of love and happiness together with a degree of sadness. Thank you so much for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I have read this story many times and I always end with a damp eye ! Beautifully written and a true love story that can really be enjoyed . Thank you

paulzballzpaulzballzabout 3 years ago

this is one of the best. thank you

Shmcurdcc06Shmcurdcc06almost 3 years ago

Anything I could add would only diminish what I have just read.

cpl757cpl757almost 3 years ago

Very nice. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful love story

STILL CRYING

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I've read this story about 5 times now so it must mean something to me

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Truly wonderful.

DapitbullDapitbullover 2 years ago

True love im still crying

Crissy4uCrissy4uover 2 years ago

Crying 😭

Beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WoW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I just want to fap not cry.

5/5 on this story though, such bittersweet ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Every time I come back and reread this, I rate it 5 stars and cry before and after rating it. Love like this is rare, in stories and life. Thanks for making us believe it nad live with it, even for a short while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a well wrought story. It brought tears to the eyes of this old geezer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm a 72 yr old Vietnam Veteran and your story made me shed a few tears. Wonderful read and I won't soon forget " Laura's Vineyard " Don D.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Probably the best one I have read in this format. Beautiful flowing sentences, no grammatical errors and no obscene sexual phrasing either. You are a gifted writer.

bob4300sbob4300sabout 2 years ago

I’ve read this story a dozen times over the years. Still my favorite. Incredibly well done.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53about 2 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Words cannot express enough how wonderful it is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely beautiful!

2old4us2old4usalmost 2 years ago

What a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Bloody great and so real.

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

Oh my word, that was a wonderful tale, somehow you completely captured their sense of loss and desolation but mixed with hope, wistfulness and love, I’m in tears after reading that and tbh I’m not sure why. Damn fine story though. 5⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

OUTSTANDING STORY! THANK YOU!

oakapple1234oakapple1234almost 2 years ago

What a touching, heartfelt story—full of emotion, regret, and love. One of the most deeply satisfying I’ve read on Literotica.

The only little point to raise—The University of Michigan doesn’t have a program in agriculture. That’s at Michigan State. Both have engineering programs, though (says a grad of both schools).

roadking42447roadking42447over 1 year ago

very well written !

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

I don't really like crying to a story but I am willing to make exceptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellently done.... Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Laura's Vineyard is one of my favorite stories. I come back to it every once in a while and am always touched by reading it.

Thank you for such a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the best stories I’ve read on this site … wonderful!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 1 year ago

reread for me and this is still great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great, I thought it well re-searched peroid story. No mandatory oral, anal, glazing, choking or rough. I think with being younger the phrasing of her reaching down to stimulate the clitoris was out of place, with her natural grooming how could he see the nub? Her doing the action fits, just that wording seem more 2023 stroke story. Parts of the ending seemed long, liked Wendy's playfulness. I really did enjoyed the story.

OlaaOlaaabout 1 year ago

I don't often write reviews but this one moved me Well Done you made a Fan

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I’d give you a 10 on this one if I could! Probably the best story I’ve read on this site. Well done!

JoeMo1619JoeMo1619about 1 year ago

Unbelievable good story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderfull story. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A beautiful story.

Thank you.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Simply Wonderfull

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I am a 73 year old male.

I wept.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is hands down one of the best, if not THE BEST stories I have read on Literotica or ANY OTHER erotica story website! Definitely the BEST ROMANCE STORY HERE! And I usually don't enjoy the Romance category! Thank you Ronde !

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Do not ever stop writing!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Beautiful and touching! I am really enjoying your stories.

RangeExpanderRangeExpander11 months ago

This is really lovely and grabs my heart as well as my balls, in the best way. I love the characters, and the depth. I was a bit put out by the suddenness of Laura's transformation from grumpy and frumpy to gorgeous, but that was the only moment that seemed to miss a best. Everything else felt real and natural and lovely, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Absolutely beautiful!

abboncabbonc10 months ago

As far as I can recall, this is the first story I ever read on this site, back in 2002 or thereabouts. I haven't read it again until now, and it is still a beautiful tale.

I am glad to see that you are back, but, as a long-time reader on this site, may I be so bold as to offer a small piece of advice?

Slow down! You are submiting stories at express speed, but the proofreading is suffering, as shown by the increasing number of typos.

Looking forward to reading even more of your work, including some of your previous submissions in other categories, that I have not read (because I don't usually read in those categories!)

Best wishes,

Nick

Darkie10Darkie109 months ago

This is a sweet story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I remember reading this story years ago and I am just as enchanted by it now as I was then.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Beautiful!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman9 months ago

Just an excellent story. Thanks, my 2nd reading.

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirens8 months ago

A wonderful story! Wish I could give this more than five stars. Thanks for sharing.

OvercriticalOvercritical8 months ago

This story describes a touch of personal magic that happens between two people who don't let convention and others dictate their behavior towards each other. It tells us to treat others with an open mind rather than prejudge them. It left me with a very warm feeling. 5*, of course.

Anghellic_RageAnghellic_Rage8 months ago

I stumbled across this story some years ago but after some searching I discovered it still has the same magic that it did when I first found it. Bravo to you on an exquisite tale of enduring love and un conditional understanding.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very touching

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Beautiful storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Loved it. Even if it did bring tears to my old man's eyes.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Simply excellent

BabalooieBabalooie7 months ago

Beautiful story.

Just_John1Just_John17 months ago

Reading through this one again. Read it so many times I’ve lost count. Just awesome. Thank you so much for sharing your work and characters with us. An excellent read!

Jj1

LeFrog08LeFrog087 months ago

Very nice. Another one I liked.

I’ve just discovered this author

and I’m currently Ronde binging.

Cracker270Cracker2706 months ago

This is one damn fine story. Thank you

wwaldripwwaldrip5 months ago

A very romantic loving caring story, as I read it tears came to my eyes. Keep writing!

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

I wasn't able to find a score or comment but I know I read it. I had added it to my favorites. This might be your best story but you've written so many wonderful ones! Thanks.

5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Damned hayfever, in November too.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

On a scale of one to ten, you deserve a Twelve for this tale.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is the third time I have read this wonderful story. Thank you for a true love story!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Real people with real love will always touch the sole. Thanks for showing what it manifests.

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