All Comments on 'Let Me Entertain You'

As soon as it became apparent that this was one of those stories written in a conversational style I knew no matter how well crafted the story, I was going to hear, not see the action. One star pretty lady.

Very good use of the style, not usually my favorite style, but this is well done! It sounds like 'black denim trousers and motorcycle boots' are on the floor somewhere close by! Sturgis or Daytona? You may get Hubby back slightly broken (or at least bent!)

5*

As with others, I was put off by the 2nd person usage. I read your others & found unmerited shifts between past & present tense. If the story is for the reader, best to facilitate the suspension of disbelief by simplifying grammatical structures.

Really enjoyed it - wonderful action

I'm surprised this story has a fairly low score - I don't usually like this style of writing, but I was pleasantly surprised and found it suitably erotic and arousing. Hit the spot for me.

Always love your stories ... Welcome back!

Another whore story.