All Comments on 'Long Time No See'

only because the slap was a turnoff. Otherwise an excellent beginning...

I not sure where this story is going, but I'm not a fan of violence. I have to agree where is the slap coming from in your story.

This story really didn't need the violence, it would have been better without it.

Would have been better as a seduction piece. Basically where she seduces him and leaves her current boyfriend.

I'm going to have to agree with 'why the violence'? I'm not sure where the slap came from???? I completely enjoyed the story, dialogue and interaction other than the slap.

Why did he slap her? Anyway you need to finish the story.

Ooh please finish. It's just so good and the whole slap this was just so funny and totally unexpected that i just loved it! So please please please write a new chapter!*begging*

I loved it plz continue...sounds like the start of a good BDSM story.

Carlo is a asshole!